hey..
thanks for this great chapter.. once again i couldn't stop reading

hope to hear from you soon..

thanks again..

:)

Hurrah - fluffage. Another great part Cath. Love the banter between Nick and Maggie and PJ, despite the fact he managed to put his size 12s in it. Lovely part and looking forward to seeing Maggie settle in at home.

As for Baddiel and Skinner, I've got the single somewhere. One problem though, despite the song, football never actually really came home (i.e. England didn't win). I'm hoping the song will be more accurate where Mags and PJ are concerned.

wow! that was awesome!
loved the whole bit with tom&joe :) so cute
with them protecting maggie and the whole choccie
frog thing. loved it! please keep writting this and
update soon.

I have just read the last six updates you have written and wow talk about an emotional rollercoaster!

The scenes with PJ by Maggie's bedside were beautiful, I could feel PJ's anguish not only in regards to Maggie but in regards to having to be a father to his children. This was the first time he really needed to step up for his boys and it was so lovingly written and characterized.

The drama of Maggie finally remembering was also great, this was kind of the moment I was waiting for when everything clicked back into place and I did like the way you handled it. Sometimes it can be hard not to cross that line into the dubbed "soapie" content where things are dramatic but lack believability. I believed every reaction, thought and feeling of PJ and Maggie which is a huge tribute to your writing.

Can't wait to see what comes next.

omg thanks so much for updating cant wait until it's wrapped up but then it will be dissapointing cause its finished they should have another baby

just an idea thanks again

cheers

Two more brilliant parts Cath. The emotion just leaps out of the screen. My heart just breaks for Maggie, what an awful realisation she has had to come to about Mick, but maybe now she can truly move forward and she and PJ can build their life together and maybe even think about their 'next baby'

Loving it as ever.

What a wonderful way to start the week. Two great parts there Cath. You've really captured PJ's anguish - I just want to give the man a hug ;-) The scenes with the twins are really moving as well.

Poor Maggie, I guess ultimately it is better to know but what a thing to have to come to terms with. At least now though she's awake and will come through it with PJ at her side. That is what's going to happen isn't it??

thanks again for the fantastic story..
cannot wait to see what pj says to maggie..
hope to get an update soon..

THANKS_YOU :)

so glad you updated! this story is awesome.
once again you wrote the emotions of pj really
well. please keep updating

thanks again for the update..!

this is a great story and you are a great writer.
you have captured each moment with the correct emotions
and understanding.. the character seem so really and life like..

THANK_YOU AGAIN :)

can't wait for another update

Another great part. Aw, the twins are so lovely. I particularly love the fact that Joe is so sensitive and perceptive. I also love the fact that they can take on not only Tom but also Nick.

Here's hoping Maggie wakes up soon, else I think the strain could be too much for everyone.

As for being at the front of the queue Cath, that's because I'm so quiet no-one notices me slipping into place.

omg thanks so much for updating

you wrote it really well and i could
tell some how unconciously which tom was which

well done!

please make maggie better
i would hate to see such a good fic end in sadness :',(

thanks again

sarah

Cath, I've finally caught up and it was so worth it. Poor PJ, I jsut wanted to give the man a hug, (still do). You caputured his fear so well. Thank heavens Zoe was there, because I really don't think PJ could have kept control on his own.

Great to see you updating this and as ever looking forward to more.

OH MY GOD! i loved it :)
you've done an absoloutley fantastic job.
you wrote the emotions really well, loved how
PJ thought he might loose Maggie. can't wait
to read some more.

OMG cool as you updated

let me guess maggie had the panic attack like
at the rail thing the train warehouse were she "DIED"
wink wink**
omg so cool you updated im really happy this is a really good chapter
i liked how

zoe was like trying to get her to fall asleep
"i thought she'd sleep through it"
and how pj knew exactly what was wrong


cool keep updating cant wait for holidays

Sarah