Cute, fluffy, sweet,AND with Tal/Ray. *does happy dance* I'm wif u on this 1 though- Valentines Day (the real day) can go rot. Couple of improvements: try not to repeat the word day to many times, try rereading your 3rd paragraph and u'll c wot i mean. Very good in general though. :)

to tell you an honest fact. Some parts were kind of umm boring. You should not put an insider scoop an example: "When the doorbell rang, Kai had to open the door. Rei was busy doing the dishes (to afraid to open the door because of a certain redhead that we leave unnamed at the moment)," the bracket part. But it was ok,

Schwarz Stein

kai: kawaii tala was sweet. does that mean it's the end of the world? any who i loved it

really cute!

LOL!
I love BryXKai!!
you should of written more about them but I like this version to!
LOL
:)