I liked it. It was short, simple, but sweet. Like, you know, the way the word "sweet" is used in the phrase "short and sweet". It was good :)

Wonderful.. Very moving short piece. I like your touch, and your insight into the characters.

Hmm. I like the sound of this. Very well done.

I really liked this one. It was just as long as it needed to be, very nicely written. Poor Ian, you give him hope.

Hey MadFanGirl,

I like your story. Don't you just luvvvvvvvvvvv Ian? I know I do. Can't waite for my stories from ya.

*grin* I like...

Very, very nice.Utterly profound and brief, much like a haiku into Ian's mind. Beautiful! Keep it up!

wow, gives great insight in Ian's character. great job!

Very good! I hope to see more of your fics posted soon.

Nifty. I want more. Ian and sara rock.

I dont know what else to say but that I liked it. It was the perfect length and with good insight into Ian and Irons character.