 littlefreakshow 2009-10-24 . chapter 1...utterly brilliant. I was a little confused by the conversation but thats what makes it amazing in its own way. |
 xsasusaku4everx 2009-09-21 . chapter 1aww!! its so sweet! a bit confusing but sweet! <3 =^.^= |
 pockybandits89 2009-08-23 . chapter 1that was cute |
 MyUsedRomance 2009-07-23 . chapter 1hahah. very cute. it's a lovely piece of hope. :D |
 moor 2009-03-29 . chapter 1Ah, I see what you mean about the internal dialogue & flips between POV, now -- it was a bit hard to follow at times, but it kind of made sense to add to the havoc between them. XD |
 MereAnarchy 2008-10-13 . chapter 1 Ah. Well-written SasuSaku. *swoon* |
 RoaringTiger 2008-08-23 . chapter 1 W-o-w. I love it! I love the modern day Sasuke and Sakura! |
 Princess Bhria 2008-08-12 . chapter 1I like this story!
ALL OF YOUR STORIES MESS UP MY HEAD!
It's like, i get so into it and then...BAM!
THE FREAKIN' END!
its always the good stuff that doesn't last long...
-sighs-
nice story
:) |
 vikkaayBYAH 2008-07-07 . chapter 1I very much loved it. It was intelligent and witty and so IN CHARACTER and yay.
Great job. Awesome. Thanks. For writing, you know?
.. yeah, thanks. ^^ |
 leaf.does.not.wither 2008-02-18 . chapter 1Oh my Goodness gracious. I love you. I really do, this story was just so…gah, I don’t know, likeable? Lovable? Hopeful? I don’t know…your whole plot, setting and characterization were so elegantly established, I was grinning at my screen throughout the whole thing. It’s so rare for me to stumble upon good SasuSaku, I just relish when I do =) Hope you keep writing about these two. In fact, if you expanded on this story I would be one happy cookie. I mean, come on! Long-haired Sasuke running cross-country and being a geek (as much as – I’m sure – he denies it!) is just begging for more. |
 Wolfie559933 2008-02-17 . chapter 1I actually think this is one of the better one-shots that totally confuse me o0
Nonetheless, I still love it!
And I'm sorry that I'm going to make this shorter than the other ones.
Though I absolutely love the fact that Sasuke is being so proud and arrogant, and won't let Sakura see that he cares for her, and I love how Sakura always hopes and sees the way he cares, sees the way he never says no, and how he truly does love her, in a sense, and at the same time, I enjoy how it didn't get so incredibly mushy- "Oh, Sakura, I have just now, at this moment, stopped hating you with my entire being and will now obsess over you and we will get married and have kids." Yeah, no. That is an example of the kind of story I hate. And I appreciate that you never do anything like that, how you always give an intelligent reason why, and always make it seem as though that is what the characters would actually do.
And wow, I thought I said this was going to be short o0
~Wolfie |
 Creeper Magnet 2007-12-15 . chapter 1This is great. I love the whole relationship you've built between Sasuke and Sakura- I can really see it that way you know?
I especially love your word choice and how the story just seemed to flow along together. It left me with this somewhat tingly aww feeling, for lack of a better phrase. |
 Nachtweiss 2007-11-04 . chapter 1LYKE OMGLOLZ SO CUT3! Sorry...okay, that's over with. I really love your stories and this is so WONDERFULLY GOOD that all puns are forgiven. Nah...I didn't mind the puns at all...well, there was only one...BUT STILL.
ANYHOO, very nice. Sorry for all of the capslocks and sorrys in this thing. |
 shadowsinfire 2007-09-04 . chapter 1This is probably the first AU Sasuke I've actually found believable, for which you get cookies.
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 DewWater 2007-09-02 . chapter 1Lol this was funny and cute and sugar-high. (er...coffee-high?) |