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littlefreakshow
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
...utterly brilliant. I was a little confused by the conversation but thats what makes it amazing in its own way.
xsasusaku4everx
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
aww!! its so sweet! a bit confusing but sweet! <3 =^.^=
pockybandits89
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
that was cute
MyUsedRomance
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
hahah. very cute. it's a lovely piece of hope. :D
moor
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
Ah, I see what you mean about the internal dialogue & flips between POV, now -- it was a bit hard to follow at times, but it kind of made sense to add to the havoc between them. XD
MereAnarchy
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
Ah. Well-written SasuSaku. *swoon*
RoaringTiger
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
W-o-w. I love it! I love the modern day Sasuke and Sakura!
Princess Bhria
2008-08-12 . chapter 1
I like this story!
ALL OF YOUR STORIES MESS UP MY HEAD!
It's like, i get so into it and then...BAM!
THE FREAKIN' END!
its always the good stuff that doesn't last long...
-sighs-
nice story
:)
vikkaayBYAH
2008-07-07 . chapter 1
I very much loved it. It was intelligent and witty and so IN CHARACTER and yay.

Great job. Awesome. Thanks. For writing, you know?

.. yeah, thanks. ^^
leaf.does.not.wither
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
Oh my Goodness gracious. I love you. I really do, this story was just so…gah, I don’t know, likeable? Lovable? Hopeful? I don’t know…your whole plot, setting and characterization were so elegantly established, I was grinning at my screen throughout the whole thing. It’s so rare for me to stumble upon good SasuSaku, I just relish when I do =) Hope you keep writing about these two. In fact, if you expanded on this story I would be one happy cookie. I mean, come on! Long-haired Sasuke running cross-country and being a geek (as much as – I’m sure – he denies it!) is just begging for more.
Wolfie559933
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
I actually think this is one of the better one-shots that totally confuse me o0

Nonetheless, I still love it!

And I'm sorry that I'm going to make this shorter than the other ones.

Though I absolutely love the fact that Sasuke is being so proud and arrogant, and won't let Sakura see that he cares for her, and I love how Sakura always hopes and sees the way he cares, sees the way he never says no, and how he truly does love her, in a sense, and at the same time, I enjoy how it didn't get so incredibly mushy- "Oh, Sakura, I have just now, at this moment, stopped hating you with my entire being and will now obsess over you and we will get married and have kids." Yeah, no. That is an example of the kind of story I hate. And I appreciate that you never do anything like that, how you always give an intelligent reason why, and always make it seem as though that is what the characters would actually do.

And wow, I thought I said this was going to be short o0

~Wolfie
Creeper Magnet
2007-12-15 . chapter 1
This is great. I love the whole relationship you've built between Sasuke and Sakura- I can really see it that way you know?

I especially love your word choice and how the story just seemed to flow along together. It left me with this somewhat tingly aww feeling, for lack of a better phrase.
Nachtweiss
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
LYKE OMGLOLZ SO CUT3! Sorry...okay, that's over with. I really love your stories and this is so WONDERFULLY GOOD that all puns are forgiven. Nah...I didn't mind the puns at all...well, there was only one...BUT STILL.

ANYHOO, very nice. Sorry for all of the capslocks and sorrys in this thing.
shadowsinfire
2007-09-04 . chapter 1
This is probably the first AU Sasuke I've actually found believable, for which you get cookies.

DewWater
2007-09-02 . chapter 1
Lol this was funny and cute and sugar-high. (er...coffee-high?)
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