 muumuu122 2009-10-02 . chapter 4Abandoned? That's a shame because I really liked this :/ The idea is just so great. |
 LisLovesYou 2009-01-03 . chapter 4wow this is much better than i expected! a model version of organzation 13..amazing =) i cant wait for the next chapter. great job on this! and aww now i feel bad for riku, kairi, and them, they worrying about sora while hes out modeling!! lol |
 ilovewriting23 2008-11-29 . chapter 2dude. i fricken love the hustle and bustle of this story. totally amazing! the humor is excellent and you've captured roxas's attitude. |
 escelphius 2008-08-15 . chapter 4Wow. . .your story's VERY original. While being original, it still manages to retain the elements shown in Chain of Memories and KHII. I applaud you for that interesting feat! Damn, I really want to know what happens next. You have some misspellings here and there, but overall, your fic is pristine. Do continue the great job! |
 -siarafaerie-101-miss 2008-06-19 . chapter 4i hope you update soon!
^^ |
 SonicThrust 2007-11-21 . chapter 4This story is hilarious! Great job. |
 Indiesin 2007-10-14 . chapter 4Oh my gawd... Hilarious! I'm loving Marluxia, and Xigbar. Hehehehehehehe... |
 TG 2007-10-09 . chapter 4 This is such a hillarious concept! I'm absolutely loving how you're characterizing everyone, especially Xigbar (or should I say Braig?).
Love it. ♥
-TG |
 Lokotei 2007-09-27 . chapter 4> Of all places to be jaded! You’d think a freakin’ design school > would have more bleeding hearts.
:lol: Sora doesn't know much about artists if he thinks they aren't jaded. XD
Yay for update! I really adore Sora's perpetual cluelessness, amnesia-induced or not. What fun. ^__^ |
 SeventhSenses 2007-09-25 . chapter 4That was great! It was quite funny, plus he offered to buy him a pickle! I'm sorry, no idea why but I find that to be quite important! |
 Sora-Kairi-4-ever 2007-09-13 . chapter 1Ah finally! I've been looking for this story ever since I found it on my mobile, the day you first put it up! I |
 Lady Mega Review 2007-07-30 . chapter 1 Another Awesome story.
I hope you keep all of this up!
^_^
-By Miss Mega-Review |
 Anime Monster 2007-06-28 . chapter 3XD Ginger Ale XD And that's a lot of dirty magazines...How long has Axel been collecting if they're falling out from under his bed?
I like this story, Marluxia having a girlfriend :o Keep it going, I want to read more! |
 i am not imaginary 2007-06-08 . chapter 3 That rocked! You sould update dude that was AWESOME! |
 Lokotei 2007-05-14 . chapter 3I'm glad you had an opportunity not only to update this travisty of logic ;p but to peek back on Sora's real life. I'm loving the puppies. Everyone needs a horde of dalmatian puppies.
Riku's so emo. X3 "I'm gonna hide in my room because we can't find my best friend."
Something about Tidus and Kairi being foster siblings is charming, and Auron's logic about emotion is... illogical, but makes for good reading. X3 |