  Lady Infinity 9/17/03 . chapter 2 I liked the first part a lot. The image of the action sequence in teh second part was good, but it felt a bit out of place.
Overall, really cool, but you lost points for the Dragonball Z references. |
| Suzy Q 1/12/02 . chapter 2 Wow! You are one awesome writer! You aparently put a lot of work into this and it's awesome - it's too bad u can't get it published b/c it's a fanfic. Maybe there's a way...*hoping 4 u* this is awesome! keep writing!
God bless you |
| Lady Infinity 10/5/01 . chapter 2 YAAAAAAAAAAAY! |
 Moonwing1 8/24/01 . chapter 2Very interesting, good humour. I'd really like to read more.
:) |
| Rosewind far to lazy to sign in 7/13/01 . chapter 2 MORE MORE MORE! why am i the only one to review this? this is a truely good story! if i was signed in, i'd add it to my favs. i'll do that later. please please please add more. email me when you post again, okay? |
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