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| Aero Angemon 2008-03-13 ch 24,  | abuseThe story is good I can't wait to read more. Aero |
| Lord Pata 2007-09-25 ch 25, | abusepretty interesting chapter, leave it to the curious Izzy to make a mess here lol |
| digitalmonster911 2007-07-17 ch 24, anon. | abuseI can see how he made that choice. Kari did always dream of being Mrs. Takeru Takaishi, after all. It's who he's been since he was three, and he'll be damned if he's changing his identity now. The only thing I don't like about the story is the fact TK acts like a jerk in the beginning and that you completely bashed him up when he said that Kari would wait and he could be with Yami first. I mean, duh! Good story. Love the "Kari and Yami are twins and so are TK and Sakura" thing. It's so cool! Keep writing, maybe with chapters that are just a LITTLE longer, eh? |
| Minwolf 2007-06-15 ch 24, | abuseHey I just read this entire story and I enjoy it alot, so the Kamiyas and Ishidas both had a child that was kidnapped at a very young age, that is interesting. I enjoyed the story alot and I was a little surprised with how Kari reacted to Gatomon and Patamon being in love. Keep on writing. |
| Lord Pata 2007-06-14 ch 24, | abuseYes you made me think on other things but I was on the right track about that it was about TK's last name xD Keep up the good work :) |
| Lord Pata 2007-04-08 ch 23, | abuseYay! all went fine in the end ^^ you scared me for a moment there XD |
| Lord Pata 2007-04-08 ch 22, | abuseo_O just when everything was going so fine this happens, life sure can be so cruel T_T Update soon I can't wait to see what will happen ^^ |
| Fiorella Takaishi 2007-04-08 ch 22, | abuseOH! NO! poor Nancy! I hope nothing happens to her... I really, really like ur fic! please update! |
| Dragon Legend of Drake 2007-04-07 ch 21, | abuseupdate soon |
| Lord Pata 2007-03-29 ch 21, | abuseYay! an update from you at last ^^ I really like how you're getting TK, Matt and Sakura's parents together again, is really cute ^_^ keep it up I really love this ^^ |
| Lord Pata 2007-03-02 ch 19, | abuselol nice poem Yami got, very direct to the point ^_^ I'm so glad Sakura, TK and Matt's parents are still in love, oh and if you ever want to use Nancy Takaishi's japanese name it is Natsuko Takaishi ^_^ |
| Fiorella Takaishi 2007-03-02 ch 19, | abuseoh! thanxz 4 the... VERY fast update.. and I luv it! so cute!! I´m so glad that Hiroaki and Nancy are getting along... plizz update soon! (u wil... *_*U) Kisses, Fio Takaishi |
| Fiorella Takaishi 2007-03-02 ch 18, | abuseUPDATE SOON! I luv this! GO SAKURA!´I´m sure her brothers r going to be VERY happy about this! ...or maybe not... lol! Kisses, Fio Takaishi |
| Lord Pata 2007-03-01 ch 18, | abuseAw Go Sakura! way to go in reuniting your parents ^_^ I know two brothers that gonna be so happy for that :P |
| Fiorella Takaishi 2007-02-28 ch 17, | abusethat was cute! FINALLY! |