Hello,

I really loved this fic and I think you showed brooklyns character and the relationship to Boris very well!
But i felt very sorry for brooklyn, when he found out that Boris not truely loved him :( but still that makes it so facinating!
But even when this fic is quite old, i wished you could write more because it was just great! I love your style of writing!
And your fic inspired me so much that i drew a doujin page even when its not so good and my irst time :) but i liked it so much!

(when you want to see it
http://AlleraLunar./art/Beyblade-doujin-site-119903268 )

although i normally am really not a fan of big angst, like with the 'colour of envy' i really liked reading the story from Brooklyn's POV because it made him seem real and there like he had feelings and i thought it was just a really good why to write. i thought the whole Boris thing was so cruel but so painfully believable and i just felt so sorry for Brooklyn. it was truly amazing.

A certainly interesting and intruiging fanfiction you've written here. I feel a bit sorry for Brooklyn though I'm not very fond of how Tala was being all mean to Boris. The pairing was certainly a first for me but certainly...different and interesting, so to speak.

That was great!The best Boris/? fic I've red in a long time.
Thanks for posting it.

i loved it!! i can't beileve i find this now!! u.u you hid this story from me XDD I SO LOVE TALA!! poor Brooklyn, but he's riht, next to Tala, he es only second best :P

a really good original fic

wow, I love this so much! Brooklyn and Tala are my two favourites... i think I like Tala more now!

that was so sad.. poor him! I never liked Boris so it was kind of gross.. but you´re writing good. XD and Tala... I wish he could just punch him.. anyway... good work

Oh, that's gold. Absolute brilliance. Very cleverly done, especially with the noticeable similarities between Brooklyn and Tala. Although, it makes me a bit "Euurgh". Mainly because it has Boris in it.
Still, fantastic story. I look forward to more one-shots in the future.

*cackles* Damn right he's second best to Tala...I was expecting Kai to be honest until he sneered at his name...I loved this...thank you once again for an awe inspiring read...

wow..poor brooklyn..i really cant imagine boris begging tala to let him touch him though...and brooklyn thought bryan was insane? that was hilarious!

Aww, my poor Brooklyn. I don't know how I felt about Boris in this, usually when people pair Boris up with someone it frightens me, but I actually didn't mind with your story. And Tala, holy shyzer, I find it amusing how he humilitated Boris and Boris just let him. I love Brooklyn's reactions to everything though, he's so oblivious, it's exactly as I imagine him doing. Lol, and Bryan, what a mouth on that boy. Anyways, thumbs-up for randomness, as weird as the pairings are, it was pretty awesome.

uhh...confused...??
umm...yeah..highly confused
i am highly as in HIGHLY disappointed on the fact that u ve completed the color of envy
cuz its hard to get brooklyn's fic n sum able writer had finally written sumthing great...well not a very pleasing choice really
it wud hav bin better if u had continued
as for this fic...
...no comments

(n no offence)
me: just a meek reader who blurts out honestly

but seriously; no comments ladya...

Yattah! (just some odd squeal...)
You meanie, you absolute meanie!
doing this to oblivious Brooklyn (from a certain point of view)
And picturing Tala like that
(heh, this and that ;P)

And worst of all, you managed to make me love reading this.
I do say, there are some similarities between the two redheads (their haircolour for one)
But luckily they do not have the same character...
imagine nature-loving Tala, wouldn't hurt a fly.
(not that he cannot love nature, not at all. Just not like... the Brooklyn way)

-big grin-
I'm stil thinking about Boris being humiliated by Tala...
Acting, as he put it, pathetic.

Anyway, you did a terrific job at writing this...
thought you ought to know :D
Lhune

Once again, you proved me wrong. The way you write your stories, it makes me forget about the odd pairings and such.

This was such a touching fic. It's been awhile since I've seen this side of Tala. I'm not talking about the violent part, maybe just the fact that he's so, controlling and lol, whorey? Whory?

And I actually teared for Brooklyn near the end. I love your oneshot, please continue writing them :)