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| Eternal Dumas 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseA certainly interesting and intruiging fanfiction you've written here. I feel a bit sorry for Brooklyn though I'm not very fond of how Tala was being all mean to Boris. The pairing was certainly a first for me but certainly...different and interesting, so to speak. |
| nichola 2008-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great!The best Boris/? fic I've red in a long time. Thanks for posting it. |
| GabZ 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusei loved it!! i can't beileve i find this now!! u.u you hid this story from me XDD I SO LOVE TALA!! poor Brooklyn, but he's riht, next to Tala, he es only second best :P |
| Mel 2007-12-30 ch 1, anon. | abusea really good original fic |
| Maria-Lilly Kon 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abusewow, I love this so much! Brooklyn and Tala are my two favourites... i think I like Tala more now! |
| Thegoldenlock 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abusethat was so sad.. poor him! I never liked Boris so it was kind of gross.. but you´re writing good. XD and Tala... I wish he could just punch him.. anyway... good work |
| Blood-red cherries 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's gold. Absolute brilliance. Very cleverly done, especially with the noticeable similarities between Brooklyn and Tala. Although, it makes me a bit "Euurgh". Mainly because it has Boris in it. Still, fantastic story. I look forward to more one-shots in the future. |
| Tala-baby 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuse*cackles* Damn right he's second best to Tala...I was expecting Kai to be honest until he sneered at his name...I loved this...thank you once again for an awe inspiring read... |
| YuriyTalaIvanov 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abusewow..poor brooklyn..i really cant imagine boris begging tala to let him touch him though...and brooklyn thought bryan was insane? that was hilarious! |
| ShadedRogue 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseAww, my poor Brooklyn. I don't know how I felt about Boris in this, usually when people pair Boris up with someone it frightens me, but I actually didn't mind with your story. And Tala, holy shyzer, I find it amusing how he humilitated Boris and Boris just let him. I love Brooklyn's reactions to everything though, he's so oblivious, it's exactly as I imagine him doing. Lol, and Bryan, what a mouth on that boy. Anyways, thumbs-up for randomness, as weird as the pairings are, it was pretty awesome. |
| Neena14 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseuhh...confused...?? umm...yeah..highly confused i am highly as in HIGHLY disappointed on the fact that u ve completed the color of envy cuz its hard to get brooklyn's fic n sum able writer had finally written sumthing great...well not a very pleasing choice really it wud hav bin better if u had continued as for this fic... ...no comments (n no offence) me: just a meek reader who blurts out honestly but seriously; no comments ladya... |
| Elves of the Moon 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseYattah! (just some odd squeal...) You meanie, you absolute meanie! doing this to oblivious Brooklyn (from a certain point of view) And picturing Tala like that (heh, this and that ;P) And worst of all, you managed to make me love reading this. I do say, there are some similarities between the two redheads (their haircolour for one) But luckily they do not have the same character... imagine nature-loving Tala, wouldn't hurt a fly. (not that he cannot love nature, not at all. Just not like... the Brooklyn way) -big grin- I'm stil thinking about Boris being humiliated by Tala... Acting, as he put it, pathetic. Anyway, you did a terrific job at writing this... thought you ought to know :D Lhune |
| Carrie 2007-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOnce again, you proved me wrong. The way you write your stories, it makes me forget about the odd pairings and such. This was such a touching fic. It's been awhile since I've seen this side of Tala. I'm not talking about the violent part, maybe just the fact that he's so, controlling and lol, whorey? Whory? And I actually teared for Brooklyn near the end. I love your oneshot, please continue writing them :) |
| SharpShooter-Pony 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseDifferent... But very well written! Poor Brooklyn... Though I must say, I was wondering to myself if the part between Bryan and Brooklyn was supposed to be funny, because I was laughing while I read it.. -.-;; Anyways, very nice piece of work! - Yuri |
| Albinate 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseOMG, what a great Valentine gift *^^*. I loved the fick. Poor Brook, but I loved how you presented Tala in this fick :D Keep up the good work ;* |