 CaliforniaBabeWV 2009-02-13 . chapter 1What a cute story! I loved it. I could totally see Cloud trying to clean the house but in the end ruining everything. lol
I liked the ending too, Cloud's "Uh...no" was adorable!
Great story, I hope you make more.
xoxo
~Cali |
 Beeria 2007-05-18 . chapter 1ROTFLMFAO!
This is one of the best Cloud/Aerith one-shots I've read in a while. It was cute, it was funny and it was realistic.
Good one Katie. Write more Clorith fics soon? xD |
 xanimejunkie 2007-03-27 . chapter 1o.o!! aww... what an adorable fic!! i'm glad i read it. keep on writing!! ^.^ |
 Foi 2007-02-18 . chapter 1That was so cute and funny! I loved it. |
 mystic-Hoshi 2007-02-14 . chapter 1loll..housework is dangerous. |
 SimpleNClean92 2007-02-14 . chapter 1That was so cute! The ending was the best, I have to say. ^_^ I loved Cloud running around and breaking stuff, it seemed so like him. XD
Great job!
~SimpleNClean92~ |
 LadyAerith83 2007-02-13 . chapter 1Oh my gosh this had me giggling so much! This was adorably written! I love how Cloud kept messing up everything in the house and his little attempts at keeping everything neat and tidy even after ruining it, that was just way too cute. Nice job! :D |
 trankwility- 2007-02-13 . chapter 1aw, the ending was totally unexpected xD
Cloud's so sweet! Him doing the chores reminds me of a 7 year old, trying to impress his mother by doing her chores than breaking everything in the house xD
It was really cute, I loved it.
Faved! |