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| the blanket 2008-07-25 ch 8,  | abuseI have no freaking idea why I didn't read this story sooner, but now that I have I can only say KFJSLKJFLSJGLJSFOWUPOSPF OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. I'm so glad you have Pause up already, because I refuse to stop now. I don't even know - the time-travel thing is SO NOT CLICHE in this story, and LKFJSKLJKGDLGJLGDG. OH MY GOD. I'm basically incoherent, but I can't wait to see what you do with the sequel. AMAZING. |
| alwaysNaruhina 2008-07-19 ch 8, | abuseWOW...it's a great story. I am glad I found it. this story is very unpredictable at least by me. now I'm going to read the next story, PAUSE. I am sure I will enjoy it as well. Ja ne! |
| fifi 2008-07-10 ch 8, anon. | abusehey your story was really good. Some time travel fics usually bore me but yours was really interesting. If you are doing a sequel then I suggest not having exactly the same kids because I doubt they would turn out the same way. Make them similar but not exactly the same. great job |
| pinkatailmon 2008-07-02 ch 8, | abuseOMG,this fanfic is so cool!!I got totally depressed after I read chapter 7.I almost cried,lol.I lighten up again after I read this chapter!!I'll say it again,awesome fanfic!Update soon,I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! |
| BuBBly CaNis luPus 2008-06-30 ch 8, | abuseWow. That was just AMAZING. I would have never thought of a story like this one. This was also the first chaptered fic that I've enjoyed in awhile. You two just...just blow me away. Time to read the sequel then! |
| PhatNaruto18 2008-05-29 ch 8, | abusewow did not see that comeing i'm goingto read pause right now |
| X ANTI NARUxSAKU X 2008-05-24 ch 8, | abusethat was the worst ending ever. if they were going to change the future then naruto shouldn't have went with sasuke because then sakura and hinata wouldn't have their kids. it was confusing in my opinion, i think you should change the ending |
| evil candy 2008-05-21 ch 2, | abusewow! this is the best story i ever read. and believe me...i read a lot! nice job! my thumbs are up:D |
| evil candy 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abusethat's awesome!:D |
| windyday 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseawesome story, that's all i could say. |
| Sun-diva 2008-05-04 ch 8, | abuseWoah! AWESOME story!! =D It's really good! |
| Moon-Diva 2008-05-04 ch 8, | abuseWOW! This is probably one of the most original idea for a fanfic I've ever come across! It was fun too read this =] Good job with characterizations! I'm now off to read the sequel! And so the plot thickens... (^.^) |
| .yashamew 2008-04-23 ch 8, | abuseI loved this fanfic. This is the first Naruto fanfic I have ever read and I like it. I thank you for writing this so well. And I will review the next story too. |
| Kameya Karona 2008-03-12 ch 8, | abuseOH MY GOD! I cant believe it! that was an amazing story. i was at the edge of my seat the whole time, just waiting to see what they did. wow. im not fond of sasuke and sakura as a couple but you pulled it off, and naruto, just as determined as always. and twisting the end like that, i dont believe ive ever been this excited over a fic before. You have a talent, keep writing. |
| BlackRoseFire 2008-03-11 ch 8, | abuseAwesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. |