Hotaru...um...i only have a nickel...

Weird ending but I like the story...

I love your story, it was so cute.

haha!:)) the Ruka, Hotaru, Mikan and Natsume talking to Khaos-chan is really entertaining. :))

Haha, love the light hearted feeling of this fic, OOC but adorable!

I LOVD IT ALOT! ALOT! ALOT. Pls keep it up!

Hello!!
Khaos-chan..
I LIke your fanficiton.
I thought It would be the same to the other Fictions that I already have read & BTW good job you did your best..
Well then..

Take Care & God Bless,
Kisa-tan Desu!

Awesome job Hotaru! Reo is in the middle of the ocean! And i suspect without food or water. Hehe. Mikan is too dence for her own good/

Natsume got jealous~ heehee! Love the story, great dialogue, and the characters are portrayed very well.

lol, this fic was cute! and the end'n was hilarious! lol, poor Yougi, he had the worst luck ... oh well. Natsume was funny too! i like when Mikan said he punched Yougi in the face! NatsumexMikan, and RukaxHotaru 4 EVA!!~ LOVED THE FIC!!~ ^_^

nice story! we natsume and mikan became couples!! hope u make more wonderful stories!

lol Cute story!! xDD Loved the ending. xDD

Good Job! Is there a sequel?

LOL ending! VICIOUS RABBIT!

hey great story^^
i like it!^^