This story is just too adorable, and probably the first where Jack is in character around a small child. Well done for that.

Will be waiting curiously for more.

I actually just looked up potc awe (not shorthand of course) and found it right away on virtual empire pirates of the caribbean 3 script. Wonder what she would think of Barbossa?

Please udpate soon! lady O.

I'm sure, with the movie now out on DVD, you can just look at that.

I was really quite surprised by this story. I thought I wouldn't like it, but then I ended up loving it. You kept the characters in character when dealing with Creda, and wrote a believable plot. It's nice to see that she's not Jack's long lost daughter (that's so overly done in this fandom, with only a few good ones) and that she's not altering the story in any way.

Wasn't too sure about the name at first (since unusual names were very uncommon), but I ended up loving that, too.

Can't wait to see where you'll take this in AWE.

Aw, sad chapter. But I like it how Jack seems to care about her. Cute!

As for the script...you can get them? I always just memorized the lines from the films. And if you need the lines, just look at other people's fics. That's how I wrote mine. Feel free to look at them.

I know it's been a while, but please continue with this story! I love it!

nineteennintytwo

Aw...it pointed to him. That was cute! I like how the way he's beginning to warm up to her!

Haha! I love this! I really think you've got Jack really In Character!

Wow, that girl wants to go everywhere! Great chapter!

That was funny! And I liked that bit at the end!

Creda is just so cute! I have a four-year-old brother, but he isn't as clever this girl. I wonder what she was doing in Tortuga anyway?

Another hilarious chapter!

*The reviewer has rolled on the floor laughing*

Hey! Where is the next chapter? I'd really like to read it...You left it at a cliffie! No fair!

DDEC

Awsome story! I like Creda, she's so cute! Is there going to be more? (Yes, I know, not the most helpfull review...)

Clea :D

NO! Creda!