 Befanini 2007-02-14 . chapter 1*claps* Bravo! Way to do a sequel. You covered in one fic what would usually take several long, drawn-out chapters: Sanzo's angst and reservations about his first (and last! BAH! 353 4ever!) relationship. I want to kiss your Gojyo for being so insistent, and persistent, and for understanding Sanzo, and for refusing to give up. ^_^
Re the pet names - oh man that is so true. When I first started using them, I received flames enough to light my own bonfire XD but when you think of Gojyo in a relationship, and *especially* with someone he really cherishes, then it becomes so simple, so natural and so right that he would "tease" Sanzo with a pet name - tease him *and* make him feel treasured at the same time, no matter how grumpily said lover objects on the outside. ^_~
I also wanted to applaud when Goyjo slaps Sanzo. LOL Because ironically, it only proves how much he cares, ne? Just as his uncharacteristic restraint (despite proving how horny he is in other ways, heh) when it comes to actually "claiming" Sanzo really speaks of respect and somehow a way of savoring the moment for a while longer - it's Gojyo's way of saying that Sanzo is *not* like all the other conquests he had in the past. I'm just glad that Sanzo finally realized it too. ^_^
Thanks! Hope you keep writing more 53... |