Have I told u that I love this? I have? well... I LOVE THIS STORY!

and I love Dark!!

OMG! I LOVE this. If u don't write more, I think I will die! lol. I feel bad 4 Dark ( as u can tell, I am a 'fainting fan-girl" )
KEEP WRITING! do u hear me? I love it!

I really like this story!! very heartbreaking indeed.. aww...i feel bad for Dark now... :(

poor dark, riku get a grip!

poor dark, better give up on riku

That... Was... So... Beautiful... *CRIES*
Kyo: Oh jeez, get a grip already.
me: You really know how to ruin a moment, don't you Kyo-kun? *SIGHS* I FEEL SO SAD FOR DARK! *CRIES*

IFEEL SO SAD FOR DARK! *CRIES*
Kyo: Jeez, relax. You out to know Riku's like this.
me: So? Can't wait to read the epilogue, since this story was GOOD!

DARK! o.o *tears* poor Dark...*huggles* I loved it..even it was sad.

AW! that was so sad... T_T *sheds a tear*


Ja ne:

~!*everyday-snowangel*!~

por dark! L♥V3 THE POEM!! :D

aw...love how u cut out the thoughts to make it confusing. did u write the poem urself cause if u did, itz really good!

aww...i means Riku cares! :] yay!

That was so sweet! I hope Dark ended up realising that maybe Riku _didn't_ hate him after all. Riku can be such a narrow minded person sometimes...she should see how lucky she is to have someone like Dark in love with her 8D

-coughs- anyway, you're right, the song lyrics really DO fit the story! =]

Aww! That's so much better! Thanks for the lovely reply you sent me! ^_^ I definitely like this better now! I'm going to get picky and say it should be all in one chapter (it flows better that way) and maybe suggest that there be a bit of reconciliation with Dark so he's not moping around anymore. ^_^ That gave me the funniest mental image... but anyway, I don't know how you'd do that, and you don't have to, but it might finish things off a bit better...anyway, I really like this. If only we could arrange our "favorite stories" list...this would definitely be in my top five...

aw...poor dark, i feel so bad for him. great story though! hope to read your epilogue soon :]