Reviews for A Continuous Heartbreak

Reviews For: A Continuous Heartbreak

Miss Itachi Uchiha 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI really like this story!! very heartbreaking indeed.. aww...i feel bad for Dark now... :(
SilentKiller1 2008-01-04 ch 2,	abusepoor dark, riku get a grip!
SilentKiller1 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abusepoor dark, better give up on riku
Domini-chan 2007-10-25 ch 2,	abuseThat... Was... So... Beautiful... CRIES Kyo: Oh jeez, get a grip already. me: You really know how to ruin a moment, don't you Kyo-kun? SIGHS I FEEL SO SAD FOR DARK! CRIES
Domini-chan 2007-10-25 ch 1,	abuseIFEEL SO SAD FOR DARK! CRIES Kyo: Jeez, relax. You out to know Riku's like this. me: So? Can't wait to read the epilogue, since this story was GOOD!
Amanita Virosa-Amaranthus- 2007-08-08 ch 2,	abuseDARK! o.o tears poor Dark...huggles I loved it..even it was sad.
everyday-snowangel 2007-07-06 ch 2,	abuseAW! that was so sad... T_T sheds a tear Ja ne: ~!everyday-snowangel!~
^-^ jhoi 2007-06-02 ch 1, anon.	abusepor dark! L♥V3 THE POEM!! :D
alliwant 2007-03-09 ch 1,	abuseaw...love how u cut out the thoughts to make it confusing. did u write the poem urself cause if u did, itz really good!
xxmisslilangelxx 2007-03-05 ch 2,	abuseaww...i means Riku cares! :] yay!
cheeky doggie 2007-02-18 ch 2,	abuseThat was so sweet! I hope Dark ended up realising that maybe Riku _didn't_ hate him after all. Riku can be such a narrow minded person sometimes...she should see how lucky she is to have someone like Dark in love with her 8D -coughs- anyway, you're right, the song lyrics really DO fit the story! =]
Mora Black 2007-02-18 ch 2,	abuseAww! That's so much better! Thanks for the lovely reply you sent me! ^_^ I definitely like this better now! I'm going to get picky and say it should be all in one chapter (it flows better that way) and maybe suggest that there be a bit of reconciliation with Dark so he's not moping around anymore. ^_^ That gave me the funniest mental image... but anyway, I don't know how you'd do that, and you don't have to, but it might finish things off a bit better...anyway, I really like this. If only we could arrange our "favorite stories" list...this would definitely be in my top five...
xxmisslilangelxx 2007-02-17 ch 1,	abuseaw...poor dark, i feel so bad for him. great story though! hope to read your epilogue soon :]
cheeky doggie 2007-02-15 ch 1,	abuseAw...poor Dark. :( you portrayed the feelings of the characters here very well, and I think it was written very beautifully! =] The poem was so sweet too~ it was probably instinct for Riku to act that way...but she should have been more empathetic -sighs- you just gotta be sympathetic with Dark for all the heartbreaks he must have gone through... Ai, a beautiful story! ^^ and I've heard Sakura Drops as well! It's one of my favourite songs from Utada Hikaru; I don't understand the lyrics though...>_> But it's definitely a wonderful song, just like this story of yours. =D
Mora Black 2007-02-14 ch 1,	abuseI thought this sounded familiar. I like this version much better. The poem seems much less...trite... The only problem I have with this is that I don't really agree with Dark's reaction to Riku's rejection. I almost feel like he'd laugh it off and try again, but this is okay. A little too angsty for Valentine's Day (aka Singles Awareness Day). Also, in the beginning Dark is trimming the thorns off of a rose...but there is no rose mentioned with the valentine Riku gets from him. And...most thorns pop off if you break them...you don't need a knife. Sorry, a lot of little nit-picky things. I absolutely love this story idea, and enjoyed it the first time when I read it in your story, but even more here. It's really sweet. Thanks! ^_^

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