Pleaseeeee finish this story!

Please finish this story! It's great and I want to see the wedding!

So happy to see an update. Xx

Please finish this story! It's great and I want to see how it ends- especially with the election!

hi, i just started reading commander in cheif fanfiction becuase my parents have the series on dvd and after i finished all the episodes i just couldn't get enough of it! i just finished your story, ive been reading it pretty much nonstop for the last week and it's for sure the best story i've read in the commander in chief section and probably anywhere. are you a professional writer? this story is so good and better than the show was! thank you for writing this and i hope you're not done with it. i would really like to read more. also do you have any tips for writers who are just starting out?

-kara

great chapter! cant wait for a next one hopefully!

Hey Mac!
Was so excited to see that this had been updated again. I've really missed this story, and the quality of the writing still blows me away.
I love this alternative take on the Beginnings narrative, and I really hope they get their happy ending, even if it is years to late.

Love this fic,

xxoo Alyce

I'm really enjoying this story! I hadn't checked in awhile and was really glad to find a few new chapters, I'm glad you're still updating, even if only occasionally.

I really liked the story you wrote before that this went AU from and am enjoying the alternate route their lives could have taken, thank you!

AWESOME chapter! When you wrote the previous two chapters I had been wondering about were the relationship was going and how they would halndle it...I loved how you wrote the story and the direction you took.

Thanks for updating the storyline...You are the reason I still check this site!

Hope to read something from you again!

Well well well... what have we got here...m I know I have had this in my inbox for two weeks but finally... I just read it screaming children in the background and all. I like it except that it bothers me that she would think he would want to back off after taking such a big step... I would just have her take charge and tell rod that she would hire guards for every one... stealth guards if necessary.

The hard part is over... no more walking on egg shells time to be a pitt bull

So happy that your writer's block is gone. Hope it stays that way.

Can't believe I never left a review on this one. You did it just right! Perfect proposal for these two.

Thank you!

Yay! A new chapter! I thought I would have a hard time remembering what was the last thing I read but it was so easy to remember is like I never forgot how wonderful this story is. Its been a long time since CIC was cancelled but I still miss it sometimes and this story brings back so many memories. Hope all is well with you! And I am so glad you decided to write some more! Your story is on my email alert so I will come reading when I get the email! Love the chapter! cannot wait for more! :-)

I LOVE LOVE LOVE checking my e-mail and seeing an update for this story! It was excellent as always and I can't wait for more, especially now that they are finally engaged!