Great job. This was romantic and hilarious...esepecially the bits with the narrator.

Hahaha, this was very cute and funny. I wanted to hear the voice talk in the end though... hahahaha, he was really funny. Good job

I Love these two!! this was a cute fic! haha Sen-chan marrying hoji... too funny! lol Loved it!!

Laugh out loud funny. I too wondered if that stupid voice would ever shut up!

o-oh how cute! I loved the way you wrote it in 'Deka-style' too... even with the voice!! LOL! Really lovely.

I nearly choked on an ice cube reading this


"You want to mary Hoji!"

that was great :D :D :D

Hilarious and very cute. I really liked the parts where the Dekarangers got annoyed with the narration, as I've seen every episode of Dekaranger, and yes, the narration explaining everything in every episode got annoying. Good job!

Whew. Sorry for the delay, but finally I got some time to comment on this one :)

First of all, you know I love it. If there's something that I love about writings of different writers is that, usually, each person has their own personal touch to their work, making the story unique to them.

The way how you blended humor to the romance was great. There were parts in this story in which I actually laughed out loud, like when Umeko went on assuming that Sen-chan wanted to marry HOJI, of all people (I'm so lucky I wasn't drinking anything...). And having the element of humor brought in made me think of an actual episode of the show, so that was awesome :)

Another part that I found pretty interesting was how, like capncosmo pointed out, you had them break that fourth wall. I remember several of the fans get annoyed at how many times the narrator would talk about Sen-chan's thinking pose or the fact that Jasmine is an ESPer, when they all knew that by then. Bringing up that issue through the voices of the characters themselves worked really well, not to mention that it was pretty funny.

And now, once again the Deka prove the importance of teamwork, and Sen-chan and Umeko are getting married at last! What a Valentine for everyone :)

Great work on your first Sentai fic! Thanks for sharing!

Oh, thank you for breaking the fourth wall with the narrator. I could not. stop. laughing. Seriosuly.

*sniff* Now that was really cute. Very nice touch on the ending, and on the narrator dude being a pain. Happy Valentine's :)