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DyingStar
2009-07-07 . chapter 1
Old fic is old, but still good so I'll review anyway. I really loved how you wrote sulky!Hikaru and perceptive!Kaoru, because of course it fits. It totally just fits, and the ending? The little twist or what-have-you? I LOVE IT. It was so sweet and pretty and awesome and still individualized b/c she set them apart. In short, awesome fic. *faves*
animefanatic15
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
I loved how you ended this.

I really like Valentine's Day and White Day in Japan. It always seems so.. interesting to read and watch about XD

Great story, by the way. Keep on writing such good pieces of work :)
xhikaorux
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
Kawai!!..

please make a sequel about white day!

onegaai..it's so god!
SylverEyes
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
Aw, you've completely satisfied me with this little oneshot here! My Kaoru Love was sated with him being narrator, and my Hikaru/Haruhi ship love was as well. And in that unhurried, factual way that Kaoru has. :D
This was so amazingly cute and so... in character that I almost can't believe it. No really, really *in character*. It was incredible how well you wrote Hikaru in this. His sulkiness was spot on, and I loved it.
All in all, a great little story. I really enjoyed reading it, and I'll have to look at some of your other stuff. ^_^
KitsuneNaru
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
:)
KinKitsune01
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
Tono would disapprove greatly if he learned that the twins got chocolate from Haruhi, and he didn't. ;P An awesome oneshot.
truc.mi
2007-11-24 . chapter 1
Aw, very nice.
Their attitudes and characters match them perfectly.
Haha, I like the little scenes with the sweets comparisons and the ending.
Nice job on this one shot!
xyzbackwards
2007-11-15 . chapter 1
That was good. I liked it. =]
FirestormAngelBlaze
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
much-loved and very sweetly-thought up. loved it, especially the cartoons - and the endings! :snorts: poor, poor Twins...

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze
ashcb
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
haha, very cute!
Shay Bo Bay
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
soo cute
i loved the ending
TakeFive
2007-04-04 . chapter 1
Ah, we need more well-written Ouran fics like this one. Well done.
Violet Marx
2007-03-10 . chapter 1
Perfect ending! xD
Ayjah
2007-02-28 . chapter 1
Cute :) well done I did not notice spelling errors myself.
fanofonepiece
2007-02-28 . chapter 1
Very good story! I loved it!
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