 DyingStar 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Old fic is old, but still good so I'll review anyway. I really loved how you wrote sulky!Hikaru and perceptive!Kaoru, because of course it fits. It totally just fits, and the ending? The little twist or what-have-you? I LOVE IT. It was so sweet and pretty and awesome and still individualized b/c she set them apart. In short, awesome fic. *faves* |
 animefanatic15 2009-06-05 . chapter 1I loved how you ended this.
I really like Valentine's Day and White Day in Japan. It always seems so.. interesting to read and watch about XD
Great story, by the way. Keep on writing such good pieces of work :) |
 xhikaorux 2009-01-01 . chapter 1Kawai!!..
please make a sequel about white day!
onegaai..it's so god! |
 SylverEyes 2008-10-21 . chapter 1Aw, you've completely satisfied me with this little oneshot here! My Kaoru Love was sated with him being narrator, and my Hikaru/Haruhi ship love was as well. And in that unhurried, factual way that Kaoru has. :D
This was so amazingly cute and so... in character that I almost can't believe it. No really, really *in character*. It was incredible how well you wrote Hikaru in this. His sulkiness was spot on, and I loved it.
All in all, a great little story. I really enjoyed reading it, and I'll have to look at some of your other stuff. ^_^ |
 KitsuneNaru 2008-07-14 . chapter 1:) |
 KinKitsune01 2007-11-29 . chapter 1Tono would disapprove greatly if he learned that the twins got chocolate from Haruhi, and he didn't. ;P An awesome oneshot. |
 truc.mi 2007-11-24 . chapter 1Aw, very nice.
Their attitudes and characters match them perfectly.
Haha, I like the little scenes with the sweets comparisons and the ending.
Nice job on this one shot! |
 xyzbackwards 2007-11-15 . chapter 1That was good. I liked it. =] |
 FirestormAngelBlaze 2007-10-14 . chapter 1much-loved and very sweetly-thought up. loved it, especially the cartoons - and the endings! :snorts: poor, poor Twins...
Ja Ne! :D :)
FirestormAngelBlaze |
 ashcb 2007-08-23 . chapter 1 haha, very cute! |
 Shay Bo Bay 2007-07-04 . chapter 1soo cute
i loved the ending |
 TakeFive 2007-04-04 . chapter 1Ah, we need more well-written Ouran fics like this one. Well done. |
 Violet Marx 2007-03-10 . chapter 1Perfect ending! xD |
 Ayjah 2007-02-28 . chapter 1Cute :) well done I did not notice spelling errors myself. |
 fanofonepiece 2007-02-28 . chapter 1Very good story! I loved it! |