nu...!
dont end it nao!
sirius looks liem he'll actually start hurting himself over this...
plzz make a sequel!

That was gorgeous, absolutely breath-taking. Terrible angst, but a painful and heartfelt description.

that was good and sad. is there more or is that it? either way its good, me like.

hiya!

wuau... really good story, think you cant write a sequel? please please say yes!

bye

Aww, so sad!
Loved it - perfect for the challenge.
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You should continue this it's realy great! you know make it a full lang-ther!