|Reviews for Eye Within|
| Forensic Nurse 5/26/07 . chapter 1
This is probably the simplest,and yet best LLV fanfic I've read so far. It was beautiful.
| anneruhland 2/15/07 . chapter 1
As usual this is a great story. I'm all for them going together next time too.
| laura27md 2/14/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful crime scene description, and Sara is just as understanding and forgiving as I'd expect her to be. Very nice!
| DaVinci13 2/14/07 . chapter 1
When you keep turning out stories that I love so much, it's practically impossible to keep thinking up original things to say in my reviews. I'm not that creative! All I can do is feel, and love your stories and tell you that as often as possible. So that's what I'm going to do: I love this story. It's an amazing, very different take on why Grissom left, and it's beautiful and sad at the same time. Sorta like the butterflies, I guess. Anyway, you did an amazing job - again. Thanks so much.
| JuanseyLio 2/14/07 . chapter 1
very well done!
| Joan Powers 2/14/07 . chapter 1
I like your explanation. Let's hope TPTB follow your example :)
| Peggy47 2/14/07 . chapter 1
Your description of the childrens' death scene in the field of wildflowers, and the butterflies "feeding on slaughtered innocence" being a symbol of resurrection was emotional and impressive.
| jtbwriter 2/14/07 . chapter 1
That was real...thanks for a very descriptive but hopeful "what if?"!
| FudginAshKetchup 2/14/07 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Grissom! What a nasty case...good story!
| Chickie Baby 2/14/07 . chapter 1
I always enjoy your stories and this one was lovely, and sweet, and sad, and I like it a lot. I always look forward to seeing a new story from you posted on your site-you're so good at exploring the sweet and bittersweet nuances of the relationships of our favorite characters, it's just a great read.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us!