 Puppetplay 2009-04-04 . chapter 3Gasp! Hidan, where'd your box go?! I bet Deidara stole it... him or Kakuzu, maybe Kisame... |
 Grievous daydreamer 2008-09-02 . chapter 3O! The box is gone?! Damn cliffhangers. XD |
 Grievous daydreamer 2008-09-02 . chapter 2I loved the whole encounter with Deidara. Funny as hell! XD |
 Solshine 2008-05-01 . chapter 3Yay, a not-yaoi Hidan story!! :D
I loved this 3 chapters I have read, I really hope you don't have another abnormally extended case of writer’s block, cause that cliffhanger left me so intrigued (duh, that the point of it, right?) :P
Please, try to update soon! :) |
 xXThAnKs-FoR-tHe-MeMoRiEsXx 2008-04-22 . chapter 3AWESOME! YOU MUST MUST MUST UPDATE SOON! PLEAASE! |
 SalemProphet 2008-04-02 . chapter 3 ahh, finally! i've been wating forever for this! xD
evil cliff hanger!
are you seriously gonna leave it on hiatus 'til oct. 1st? DX
update soo~n! |
 patty09 2008-04-01 . chapter 3ha! Hidan carryong around a pink box with a bow! |
 Akatsuki210 2008-03-31 . chapter 3Heehee, this is good! I wonder if it was Sasuke who poisoned Itachi's tea? Tobi finding a pink fluffy bunny in the forest was amusing too. |
 Originalatorian 2008-03-26 . chapter 2hurry hurry hurry! it's passed october! get on with the updating!! |
 Silver Snow Leopard 2008-02-19 . chapter 2"HA! Mine's Pink!" Epic, I choked trying so hard not to laugh... still made a few students look at me =.=
Then, when he attack Deidara, ya, that was so well timed and everything I laughed and the class looked at me. Rofl, I couldn't resist though, and kept laughing at Tobi's and Deidara's reaction.
Love it. The box is driving nuts. What's in the Darned thing?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Please update ^^ |
 lyAlive 2008-01-07 . chapter 1LMAO I luv this |
 xXThAnKs-FoR-tHe-MeMoRiEsXx 2007-12-24 . chapter 2OMG! you have got to update soon! I have to know what happens! please, please, pleaase update soon! |
 ecclaed 2007-10-05 . chapter 2LOL kjshdfkjasdhfks This was awesome, cute and so hilarious. (I rarely use the word "cute" but I just had to. I mean come on... a Valentines from the author? Hee.) You are great in portraying Hidan's stubborness XD Building up the tension of the Valentine being a bomb was a nice touch.
When Hidan nearly cut off Deidara's head, and his "Don't fucking touch me."--to Tobi, I had a laughing fit! From a lot of the fics I have read so far on Hidan is often potrayed in his dialogue with people or the internalization of his thoughts, but we rarely see how dangerous he can be through action. So whenever I see Hidan do things like that it kinda makes me go "woohoo!" for some reason. >.>
Probably 'cause I watched too many Chuck Norris movies as a kid, lol.
It's killing me that you never reveal what's in the box -_-;
Good fic :D |
 aGreatPenName 2007-09-23 . chapter 2gah! the suspense! @.@ I really want to know about this box!! lol ALert list ye go! And fantastic writing! |
 GloamGloazer 2007-08-20 . chapter 2 I MUST know what's in the box! Can't wait for more! |