Crazy xD

I had a good laugh over this one. Cute, and lovely!

Oh I love it! The combo hahah Hilarious

hehe, this is really funny.

Very Very funny.

"She smileth. 'And you, me love,

Is one helluva kisser.'"

Love the mix of language.

Thanks

that was really good! I liked how you mixed newer slang with old Shakrespearean. and putting 'eth' at the end of a lot of words was really funny! .

Well it's definately one way to put a spin on Shakespearean speech I'll kill you that. Even if it is a little odd in places(all the "ths") it was funny.

Vey amusing, indeed. A really good fic xx

... Hilarious! God, my stomach hurts!

Seriously, Zen. You're good. Love it!

Hmm the rhythm was a little iffy at points but the dialect and tone were really great. I love double meanings to many of the words, it adds dimension and alternate readings. Very cool.

*Snort* ok, it was random, but sure! Well done. D

Although my poetry knowledge is on a par with zero i think this is good :)

funny at the right places, very funny, but it also gets a cute little message across

so well done

hope you win

stacey

xx

Eh? Ehh? Eh?

Oh!

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Nice one. Loved it, so damn kawaii! ROX! Defenitely a new fav. for me!

HA HA I LOVED IT very funn when she called ron a hell of a kisser lol .

HAHAHILARIOUS! Thanks for brightening up my Valentine's Day!