|Reviews for Chance|
| HistoryHound 5/29/11 . chapter 1
This is perfect. The grave visit at the end really got to me. Very in character. Well done!
| pamellka 1/29/09 . chapter 1
Ahh! Sad!Sad, but beautiful T_T
| NeeChan92 7/10/07 . chapter 1
Now I'm crying _ That was so sad! Beautiful *sniffle* Keep up the good work!
| AkatsukiAdmireeeeer 6/26/07 . chapter 1
How sad... Kakashi, you're so mean! : This was a brilliant fic, and excellently written. Good job.
| FlashDrive 5/15/07 . chapter 1
Simply beautiful. I loved it. So sad, yet so wonderful. Great job.
| Firework 4/10/07 . chapter 1
This is probably my favorite KakaObi story out there. It's a shame there's so few stories with this pairing.
| Ash of Mine 3/27/07 . chapter 1
Here's a review now that i have stopped crying... (lol)
That was one awesome one-shot that you have offered us, one of the best in the Kakashi/Obito category i have found since i have fallen for this pairing o
The characterizations of your characters are simply amazing! I can understand how the Fourth inspired such admiration with the way you wrote him; chibi!Itachi-chan is just so cute when he said Obito-oniichan; in denial!Kakashi is heartbreaking; and Obito... Obito... Why do you have to die? (nevermind the fact that *you* *had* to follow canon...) Maybe Naruto is Obito's reincarnation...? (lol) Anyway, you made me love him so much that i'm crying all over again thinking about Kakashi's realization - far too late realization...
THAT IS WHY i'm going to grab this opportunity you offer us in your profile and give you this CHALLENGE (*Ash on her knees praying, praying and praying*):
You may have heard about this but - SPOILERS! SPOIRLERS!
there is a rumour about Obito being in fact alive and a member of Akatsuki, the one called Tobi, wearing an orange mask with a *single* hole for his eye and half of his body is kinda *weird*
- END OF SPOILERS
I have found some one-shots using this new information but they didn't convince me that much. I'm hoping here for a one-shot, sequel to 'Chance', let's say 'A second Chance'(I know, i know, i can be so *original* ;p) - with the pairing KakaObi - in which Kakashi meets Obito again (AU or not AU? That is the question... lol). I just want a happy ending where i'm not crying my heart out, just give me hope! (lol) Kakashi giving Obito a belated Valentine's gift would be a plus o
In fact, if KakaObi is one of your OTP, you should give them a second chance even if it's an AU (lol)
Anyway, thank you for sharing this lovely one-shot with us and - even if you're not interested in writing a KakaObi sequel - thank you for reading my desperate babbling ;p
| omega assassin 101 2/17/07 . chapter 1
I LOVED IT! I think you should make a sequel before the jounin exams where kakashi actually finds out that he loves obito sooner and tells him.
| Akri07 2/17/07 . chapter 1
*sniffle* This was a very beautiful story. One of the best one-shots you have created! I wanted to cry! I can't read FanFictions that much anymore. I haven't read any Ita/Nar or even Sas/Nar or anything with Naruto being the uke! Your story made me feel lots better! Thank you so much. I really hope you had a happy valentines day...
| Heosic-chan 2/15/07 . chapter 1
Yes... simple realization with some humor thrown in. I really liked the part where Rin was thinking about little chibi Arashi's eating ramen. XD
| Concubine99 2/15/07 . chapter 1
hmm...i have a question...Kakashi is like wat, 29 or something and itachi is like 15...hm...i didn't know itachi was considered a genius during the time kakashi was a with his team.
| SLYSWN 2/15/07 . chapter 1
This was so very cute, I would've reviewed yesterday but the computer was giving me problems so I'm reviewing today. I absolutely loved the whole idea of Rin envisioning chibi yondys running all around and acting like her sensei. And another part that I really enjoyed would just have to be Obito's attitude all together, so determined and friendly and everything, reminded me a great deal of what I like about Naruto. And last but certainly not least, little chibi Itachi was simply adorable.
| Yaoifan01 2/14/07 . chapter 1
Ohh my gosh The forth hokage! *yay* I love him, and i want more of him dammit! Shame, shame Obito dies... *cough or does he? cough cough* Hum, what the hell happened to rin in the series? she just go poof! bleh, we will find out later on I think. Did Obito like ramen? -.- Ah poor kaka-sensei I hate fangirls too, they scare me. -sniker- Itachi-chan.
Truthfully I didn't think this was cliche at all, only a little bit in some parts but not enough to make me go 'ew' and stop reading. It was cute, really really.
| AnimeSiren 2/14/07 . chapter 1
Oh my god! I love it!
| hearmei 2/14/07 . chapter 1
oh the angst! *clutches heart in agony* You write kakaobi so well, I felt really bad for both of them.. :(