aw..I love DeixTobi fluff

O.O Holy crap! That was freaking perfect! You gotta write more stories like that! Wow, if you wrote any better...I think all DeidaraxTobi fans would have seizures!

...-/' whats a maelstrom?

D:

I wish I could write like that. Dx -Hates lack of talent-

That was beautiful. Srsly.

8D

Very well-written, although Tobi is like super tall and Deidara is the shortest member of the Akatsuki (even shorter than Sasori!). But still, I really liked it. You're an amazing writer.

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i only way i can describe it as is...beautiful.

yay deitobi!

i like it. :D

oh..that was artful. i liked it, even if you don't think it was that great. love your style. ^_^
keep up the great work!

MAGNIFICENT
LOVE IT ^_^

I atually think this story is pretty cool. The description is quite awesome and the mood is a nice, thoughtful one. I really enjoyed reading this.

I liked this one a LOT. I thought it was beautiful [:
The way you described Deidara in the rain...
Oh my goodness.
Fantastic job

i loved that so very much. it was... beautiful.

I think it was great! Loved it! ^^

O.O wow. That was so...deep. I never would have thought to have connected Deidara with a thunder storm. ^^ You're very talented. Your imagry was wonderfull.

I am firmly against yaoi in Naruto because most characters I like I am fully positive are straight. Tobi and Deidara both happen to be characters I like yet their friendship is really touching and I wanted to see more of it, but I guess that yaoish hints aren't all too bad, especially when given by someone of such great talent as yourself.

A very nice story--very close to the heart. Thank you for it endlessly!