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Airyballoon
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
aw..I love DeixTobi fluff
Kumoru Hayabusa
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
O.O Holy crap! That was freaking perfect! You gotta write more stories like that! Wow, if you wrote any better...I think all DeidaraxTobi fans would have seizures!
BakaRamenBowl
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
...-/' whats a maelstrom?
Strawberry Massacre
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
D:

I wish I could write like that. Dx -Hates lack of talent-

That was beautiful. Srsly.

8D
Lifehouse32
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
Very well-written, although Tobi is like super tall and Deidara is the shortest member of the Akatsuki (even shorter than Sasori!). But still, I really liked it. You're an amazing writer.
NeisharieLasharie
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
...

i only way i can describe it as is...beautiful.
lon
2007-12-03 . chapter 1
yay deitobi!

i like it. :D
Medicinal Biscuit
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
oh..that was artful. i liked it, even if you don't think it was that great. love your style. ^_^
keep up the great work!
Mizuki Ayonashi
2007-10-19 . chapter 1
MAGNIFICENT
LOVE IT ^_^
Pink Illusion
2007-10-13 . chapter 1
I atually think this story is pretty cool. The description is quite awesome and the mood is a nice, thoughtful one. I really enjoyed reading this.
revenge and rebirth
2007-10-06 . chapter 1
I liked this one a LOT. I thought it was beautiful [:
The way you described Deidara in the rain...
Oh my goodness.
Fantastic job
Mizuki Yugito
2007-10-06 . chapter 1
i loved that so very much. it was... beautiful.
Rose-Dragonfire
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
I think it was great! Loved it! ^^
Black Rose TD
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
O.O wow. That was so...deep. I never would have thought to have connected Deidara with a thunder storm. ^^ You're very talented. Your imagry was wonderfull.
Dark Hope Assassin
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
I am firmly against yaoi in Naruto because most characters I like I am fully positive are straight. Tobi and Deidara both happen to be characters I like yet their friendship is really touching and I wanted to see more of it, but I guess that yaoish hints aren't all too bad, especially when given by someone of such great talent as yourself.

A very nice story--very close to the heart. Thank you for it endlessly!
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