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| Deibby 2008-03-21 ch 1,  | abuseD: I wish I could write like that. Dx -Hates lack of talent- That was beautiful. Srsly. 8D |
| Lifehouse32 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well-written, although Tobi is like super tall and Deidara is the shortest member of the Akatsuki (even shorter than Sasori!). But still, I really liked it. You're an amazing writer. |
| N.E.May 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuse... i only way i can describe it as is...beautiful. |
| lon 2007-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseyay deitobi! i like it. :D |
| Medicinal Biscuit 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseoh..that was artful. i liked it, even if you don't think it was that great. love your style. ^_^ keep up the great work! |
| Mizuki Ayonashi 2007-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseMAGNIFICENT LOVE IT ^_^ |
| Pink Illusion 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI atually think this story is pretty cool. The description is quite awesome and the mood is a nice, thoughtful one. I really enjoyed reading this. |
| revenge and rebirth 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseI liked this one a LOT. I thought it was beautiful [: The way you described Deidara in the rain... Oh my goodness. Fantastic job |
| Mizuki Yugito 2007-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved that so very much. it was... beautiful. |
| Rose-Dragonfire 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI think it was great! Loved it! ^^ |
| Black Rose TD 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseO.O wow. That was so...deep. I never would have thought to have connected Deidara with a thunder storm. ^^ You're very talented. Your imagry was wonderfull. |
| Dark Hope Assassin 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI am firmly against yaoi in Naruto because most characters I like I am fully positive are straight. Tobi and Deidara both happen to be characters I like yet their friendship is really touching and I wanted to see more of it, but I guess that yaoish hints aren't all too bad, especially when given by someone of such great talent as yourself. A very nice story--very close to the heart. Thank you for it endlessly! |
| AWESOME STORY DUDE-and/or-G... 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou described it so well i felt like i was actually watching it!AWESOME |
| PosessedPencil 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseAww, so kawaii!! and i liked it, alot... but it could have been longer... |
| zoebabii328 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abusehow sweet! i got the chills at the end lol i think it was great even if Deidara was so sarcastic that it almost threw off the story (until the end that is lol)! |