Aww! I love the friendship between Atemu and Mahaado. That old lady was scary but her premonition was great. Great job!

Ooh, Mahaado/Dark Magician is my favorite character. I love him! ^^ Very nice story! Though the crazy, ranting, old, now dead woman sort of confused me...

This story helped me realize the true strength of the bond between Atemu and Mahado. Atemu is my favorite character after Yugi, so it really meant something to me. Keep it up, this is the kind of story I enjoy!

I really do love these one-shots of yours. I keep waiting for the next one to be written, so that I can take in the pleasant insight that you give to Mahaado's character. Very few stories do that priest justice.

This was great! I loved the look into Atem's childhood and how he and Mahado interacted even before he became Pharaoh. I always got the feeling that keeping Atem out of trouble was a full time job for my favorite mage. Couldn't pay me enough to babysit that prince! Will there be more to this? If so, I look forward to it, if not...thanks for this, it was a treat to read!

I LOVE it update ASAP!