This seems like some crazy self insert (plus friends) that was conjured up from the mind of some middle school fangirl. The writings not amazing and the characters seem OOC. I would have liked to see where this would have gone but seeing on how this fic hasn't been updated since 2007 I doesn't really matter because its never going to continue.

Fun, luv the story. Please continue! Can't wait for more :)

I like this story very much! I like how you picture the girls, and I think they are not Mary Sues ate all. (Just don't pair Sara with Shuichi...) I wonder how this will continue. Please, update soon!