it was sweet and very well writen

Yay! More night head genesis :D
You should join http://community.
There's some fanfiction there, I've got one story posted up there :D
You did a great job, I loved it, the only complaint I have is that You kept misspelling Naoto as "Naota", but it's a small mistake, so no worries! Keep writing, hun! And if you need a beta, feel free to email me.

I like it. You should write more stories like this one because you're really good.

i know this is a one shot but u really should make a story out of it . ur wasting talent here!Please!!