oh wowowowow! this was AMAZING! EVEN BETTER THAN THE 1ST PART OF THIS STORY! AAGGH!

but that was AMAZING! oh wait! I already said that, huh?

wo! what a rush! LOVE the thought processes and the emotions i felt when reading this. FANTASTIC job!

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'making feel just as dizzy as she did now…'

I think you mean 'making her feel just as dizzy' ?

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great.

Yes, yes, loved it!! Love the kissing!! I want more!

WAIT YOU SERIOUSLY CANNOT JUST LEAVE IT THERE!

no write a sequel! have you written a sequel?? *rushes off to check*

ah i loved itt

I loved this one especially the reveal of Superman (I did something similar in my fic that i'm writing at the moment) Nice to know that i'm on the right lines. I actually really liked the idea that Clark would tell Lois off for drinking but my favourite part has to be when Lois tried to take off Clark's glasses and his excuse was that he was as blind as a bat! I laughed so hard. I'm now going to skip along to the next fic...should be very interesting.

*Screams like a banshee* Evil, evil!! I *have* to read more but I've got to go! *Grrs at early morning work*

OH YOU SUCK!

I can't believe you put me through all of that just to end it there with that hilarious author's interruption! And here I was thinking that it would be a great ending and I could return to my doing my paper in peace, promising God that this would be the last fic I read before I got back to work, and you go and do THIS to me?!

OH YOU SUCK!!

That was...that was great. I had to stop reading a few times to gather my own emotions and had to reread some things cuz my mind kept wandering with "endless possibilities"...

*feigning anger and narrowing eyes*
I'll be back later...

Wow...I think I left my tongue around here somewhere...then i will definatly try to say something more articulate...wow...nope thats all I got...

Sequel is NECESSARY! Cliffhangers are BAD, I tell you! Awesome fic, by the by.

Great! I hope you continue soon!

that was a great story lol im thinking how your going to have lois react...

I liked this very much. Now I am off to read the final sequel! (I tend to write the beginning, end, then the middle too!) Please keep writing!

OH so good! so intense at the end!! please continue this story!

What a wonderful fic! OMG. I loved the reveal. Those are so much fun, aren't they?

And I just loved the line about him having kissed her before. That was perfect. Well done!

You can't leave it there. I want to know what happens in between this and The Dance. It's cruel to end with that. Please, please, please continue it!

Revelation fics are always interesting and her realization seems very much in character for Superman Returns Lois. Good job.