I'm sorry, I've just passed out from laughing too hard.

This was FANTASTIC. Finally, a Hiruma/Mamori fanfiction that actually feels like it could fit in with the show! The invention of love-go was genius and fits in perfectly with the quirky humor of the series. Plus, the other team members actually existed!

My ONLY reservations for the story was the unnecessary out-of-place Japanese ("“Baka.” The three brothers muttered as the monkey shock his fist in pain.") and a few typos. Other than that... perfect!

I laughed so hard. This was hilarious! I loved the overly flamboyant "translations", and the end line was awesome.

I think my favorite part was this one though:
“This is just like ‘The Young and the Friendless’.” Togano muttered.

“… You actually watch that stuff?” Kuroki looked at his long time friend.

XD Nice!

LOL

I laugh till I'm rolling on my bed! Can't believe the ending! Why is that Taki was so i-d-i-o-t...?!


PS: Well, better make more! I'm searching for the 'married' version.. its gonna be awesome!

-_- lol OMG ROFLMAO! soo funny yet it makes some sort of weird sense! OMG LOLZ

LOL! hahah oh christ Taki, what in the world?!?!? holy cow, i cant wait till the next chappie! nice job so far!

OH MY FREAKING GOSH! THAT WAS AN AWESOME LAST LINE! I laughed so hard! good story, keep up the good work!

ROTFL!! LOVEDIT! MORES! :3

Oh Taki is such an idiot! Any way i think this is a very good ficlet! It would be amusing if you continued it! LOL! ^_~

That was really cute! The Shakespear-ish English is really funny!! Love it!

OMG. I love Taki now because of you. "When is the wedding" indeed! XD!

lol! Yukimitsu put on a hat! just because of his shiny head.
honestly I burst out laughing on that part. not literally though.

taki...poor taki no baka!! he was gagged and tied.

a heart-go!? lol.

lol kurita's translation is so sickeningly sweet and out of character!

lol// ok I'm literally laughing.

lol taki. you just have to break wveryone's effort to shut up when they asked that question. lol.

ok this is a good read.

I MUST ADMIT. lots of errors typo mostly but effectively delivered. you have to make another one.

hahaha.. very funny.. !
Heart-Go eh?! very amusing..
i didn't know Kurita-san was that smart.. ehehe

THAT WAS SO CUTE!
LOVE IT!
LOVE IT!

So... Very... Scary... Hiruma fathering children?! It's so much!

But it was damn hilarious. The complete weirdness of this pairing just makes me laugh. Heart-go, huh? Pretty impressive idea you milked from the Powerful-go. I kind of both shuddered and smiled at the translations of the bickering.

The last line was the cherry on top. Taki is just a doofus.