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| Tearainy 2007-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseOh Taki is such an idiot! Any way i think this is a very good ficlet! It would be amusing if you continued it! LOL! ^_~ |
| devil cat07 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute! The Shakespear-ish English is really funny!! Love it! |
| Luna Addictus 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseOMG. I love Taki now because of you. "When is the wedding" indeed! XD! |
| rhoeheim 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuselol! Yukimitsu put on a hat! just because of his shiny head. honestly I burst out laughing on that part. not literally though. taki...poor taki no baka!! he was gagged and tied. a heart-go!? lol. lol kurita's translation is so sickeningly sweet and out of character! lol// ok I'm literally laughing. lol taki. you just have to break wveryone's effort to shut up when they asked that question. lol. ok this is a good read. I MUST ADMIT. lots of errors typo mostly but effectively delivered. you have to make another one. |
| zoofreak 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusehahaha.. very funny.. ! Heart-Go eh?! very amusing.. i didn't know Kurita-san was that smart.. ehehe |
| ctk3 2007-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHAT WAS SO CUTE! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! |
| XyoushaX 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseSo... Very... Scary... Hiruma fathering children?! It's so much! But it was damn hilarious. The complete weirdness of this pairing just makes me laugh. Heart-go, huh? Pretty impressive idea you milked from the Powerful-go. I kind of both shuddered and smiled at the translations of the bickering. The last line was the cherry on top. Taki is just a doofus. |
| Os.Hoshi 2007-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat Taki is SUCH an idiot! But such a gleeful idiot =] That was a great ending! |
| Sei Kou Ki 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseAH, I love how you had the entire team in there! The interactions between everyone and the concept of Heart-go were all hilarious and adorable, great job. |
| Z 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read this at work and had to stop myself from laughing out loud several times. The best part: "Taki raised his hand with a bright smile. “When’s the wedding?!” " !! ^0^ |
| Verna-S 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThe translations had me laughing. Oh, clever. |
| Chranze 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute. I love your writing style! |
| raitei85 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Taki die! I love your fic..that's cute! |
| Cherry tiger 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I love this fic. I never knew Kurita would understand heartgo... and the best part is how funny the way each action Hiruma and Mamori made were translated. Love this! Keep it up! ^^ We need more HiruMamo! |
| Lacewing 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuse*cackles* LOL Love-Go! GO! LOL Taki is soo dead.. If Hurima doesn't shoot him Mamori will likely beat him to death LOL |