 Gothic-Romantic99 10/12/11 . chapter 1Aww, this story is just as cute as your other one. You definitely know how to write a fluffy story. The Wammy children are just so adorable.
Mello, while he can be rude, especially to Near, it's so sweet how he makes cookies for L. By adding all the extra sugar and frosting he makes sure L will love them. It's so cute how he explains that he's putting all the extra frosting on there because it's being made with love. So cute. The fact that L enjoys the cookies makes it even better.
The final scene between Mello and Near is cute. A shy Mello is always adorable.
Good work with this story. |
 deadaccountsorrybye 8/9/08 . chapter 1I love how you portray the Wammy house bunch before Kira decided to come and mess everything up. This was sweet. c: |
 Rinbins 10/13/07 . chapter 1Okay, I lied. I said that Operation Fairy Capture was the most adorable Wammy fic ever. WELL, IT'S NOT. THIS ONE IS.
I'm happy inside... 3 I'm totally this little puddle of sqeeing Rinna goo now. |
 False-Image 7/12/07 . chapter 1Aww! Cute! It was adorable D |
 BookDragon 2/20/07 . chapter 1Cute |
 wingless crimson 2/19/07 . chapter 1This is just really really really cute _
-melts in a puddle of cuteness- |
 MlleD 2/19/07 . chapter 1Aww. I love fics about Mello like this. |
 schoolgirl-cheesesculpture 2/18/07 . chapter 1lol funny...and i dont even know that much about near or mello... |
 pandora029 2/18/07 . chapter 1"They're frosted with love, damn it!" Aw, that was so cute :3
Good work! |
 Koji 2/18/07 . chapter 1 Cute! _ haha, love that so much! |
 dead-girls 2/17/07 . chapter 1"They're frosted with love, damn it!"
I knew I had to read this as soon as I saw the title! This sent me cracking up laughing, and squealing at how adorable it is. I love the the way you portrayed Mello as 10. Very well-written, awesome work! |
 Eyes-of-Crimson 2/15/07 . chapter 1aw! kawaii! |
 See More Glasses 2/15/07 . chapter 1Nifty story. Thanks for the quick read. |
 artemisgirl 2/15/07 . chapter 1I LOVE this fic. I wrote a MN fluff fic for Valentine's Day too, but mine pales in comparison to the brilliance of yours. I LOVE it. And the title kicks ass. :P |
 SunMoonAndSpoon 2/15/07 . chapter 1Thank you. That was the best distraction from my homework ever. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic, despite not really liking Mello or Near. The half-perfect, half-messy cookie at the end was a great little symbol, and the rest of it was just...sweet. I love everybody worshiped L like that, it seems really realistic...good job! The whole baking cookies thing made me laugh, since I just made cookies for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day, and had about as many problems with it as Mello did! XD Anyway, great fic, love it lots. |