This is a wonderful story! Please continue! And I hope that Abby gets together with Cliff _ and that Jack gets with Karen. D LOL, it's just my opinion. Okay, I'll shut up now _

**(: Fairy Friend :)***

hey! good job! i'm a lil bit confused since i never played this apticular harvest moon game but i did play the 64 one and it has pretty much the same people. keep it up!

GRRRRRRRR...how come every time i come up with a good idea i find out somebody's already done it? ;;; o well, i've changed my idea a little...but, the review! it's really good, i like it! please write more!

P.S. mind if i still continue with my idea? if not, i haven't posted it yet, so don't get mad.

Cool BTN and For Girl put together...

Hey, that's a pretty cool new idea. Having his sister there would help relieve The Farmer's lonliness. But, what will they do when he gets married?

Good as always. Title of Chapter Two-funny!

It's very well written and I like the plot a lot. A sister/brother story. Keep it up, I can't wait for chapter 2! Go Abigail! You're better than Jack! (J/k)

You should continue!

Interesting... keep writing!