 NorthernLights25 2007-09-08 . chapter 5Update soon! |
 Masquerading 2007-07-31 . chapter 5please update soon
i tried to read elsewhere b/c the story idea seemed good but the main character got on my nerves son i couldn't finish it
so please continue! i really want to find out what happens |
 xWarpedxPerspectivex 2007-07-03 . chapter 5well im super glad its a good idea:) BUT NOW... u have to get ur butt MOVING! im gettin impatient lol |
 GoodyGoody23 2007-06-29 . chapter 5Haha, I'm glad. It was very good. I really want to figure out some stuff, so keep writing! Update soon! |
 Alice-In-Wonderland101 2007-06-28 . chapter 5hehee wonder what he lookes like probably HOT HOT!!
~Alice~ |
 living in Fantasy 2007-06-23 . chapter 5lol. Okay Update asap I am dying here. Hope you have fun on the 4th |
 forgotten twilight 2007-06-19 . chapter 5okay, a little short, and a long wait. but i'm glad you did update. whoever this seth guy is sounds nice. |
 VampyreQueen24 2007-06-19 . chapter 1Ah! Elsewhere was such a good book! Color me excited! |
 Tigerlillium 2007-06-18 . chapter 5Is it love at first sight? UPDATE SOON! |
 Lets play x D e a d 2007-06-18 . chapter 5Wow, this is pretty creative... Now that I've read this... I would really like to read that book, whose the Author? Can't wait for an Update :) |
 xWarpedxPerspectivex 2007-04-09 . chapter 4ahh! whats goin on! im confused! and edward doesnt care!? WHAT!? if bella doesnt go back to the cullens ill probably have to scream and throw some burnt toast! and of course i had to give u a possibly bad idea lol great :) keep it up! |
 GoodyGoody23 2007-04-05 . chapter 4Very... interesting chapter. I'll say it in English this time too:I loved it very much. Please update soon. |
 forgotten twilight 2007-04-02 . chapter 1not fair. i thought of a plot for a fanfiction that was pretty much exactly like this. o well. LOL keep going though. i really really really really really want o know what happens! and i love how you make the chapters into songfics. XD |
 forgotten twilight 2007-04-02 . chapter 4UPDAT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
 living in Fantasy 2007-04-02 . chapter 4Oh My God. Edward having se-sex with someone other than Bella? Nasty mental image! Ugh I dont think I will ever get over it, ew. Edward is so unappealing right now! Ok what ever I am over it, I have nothing to say about this chapter, I feel like I just walked in on two old people doing it Jesus! Either which way you still need to update soon cause now their letting stupid people right fanfics(that are so freaking corny) and it hurts my eyes to see that! Plus I have to see a good fanfic at least once a week. I have the tendancey to ramble on if you h avent noticed so when you recive my autobiograpy please understand that it for my best intentions lmao. Aim: Update soon |