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Aura
2009-06-15 . chapter 1
... lol that is funny. I'm a bad revewer/typer... but it was a funny story.
inadey
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
I loved it are you gonna make more stuff like this
edised
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
naruto really dos not get stuff
Gravity The Wizard
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Nice Story!
Lanalisha-Thezii
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
LOL!
Kasuchi, Koichi
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
I laughed my ** off! The parts with Jiraiya and Shikamaru were the funnist parts. "Traitor!" lol.
NaruxHina831
2008-07-12 . chapter 1
haha that was funny. naruto is so dense
pinkatailmon
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Cute and comical.NaruHina Totally rocks!I liked how you made it that Naruto didn't have a clue about Valentine's day!
Justicez
2008-05-23 . chapter 1
Oh my, this was soo good and funny, nice work. The ending was sweet and funny too.
FictionWeaver
2008-01-31 . chapter 1
I can almost see this happening in cannon or in a good N/H fic. Lots of comedy and well planned, I just wish it was longer.

FictionWeaver
DarkHeroOrion
2008-01-18 . chapter 1
Two words to describe this fic...chaotic mayhem. It was funny and light-hearted. It was good to see the characters act in-character, so Naruto's thickheadedness really shines through on this one. Kudos!
AiSard
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
gawdlol hilarious >.< especially the very end what with Hiashi telling Naruto to call him Father and Neji's nod of consent along with Naruto's oblivious-ness to it all, inane belief that everything is now turning out to be all right after all *snicker* =P
Marz1
2007-11-20 . chapter 1
pretty good short story with everyone in character and everyone beating up poor naruto! good job!
lil.ramen.lover
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
he proposed on the first date?!?! OMG! LMAO

GOOD JOB!
Ivellios
2007-10-25 . chapter 1
This was a great one-shot. I like how Naruto is so clueless that he doesn't even realize he proposed to Hinata and that they are engaged. Yet another hilarious one shot. My question is, when will you update "Awakening of the Slumbering Beast." Well I hope you are well and that you can update soon.

Your Friend,

Zach
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