 Aura 2009-06-15 . chapter 1 ... lol that is funny. I'm a bad revewer/typer... but it was a funny story. |
 inadey 2009-04-25 . chapter 1I loved it are you gonna make more stuff like this |
 edised 2009-03-09 . chapter 1naruto really dos not get stuff |
 Gravity The Wizard 2009-03-09 . chapter 1Nice Story! |
 Lanalisha-Thezii 2008-12-05 . chapter 1LOL! |
 Kasuchi, Koichi 2008-08-10 . chapter 1 I laughed my ** off! The parts with Jiraiya and Shikamaru were the funnist parts. "Traitor!" lol. |
 NaruxHina831 2008-07-12 . chapter 1haha that was funny. naruto is so dense |
 pinkatailmon 2008-06-27 . chapter 1Cute and comical.NaruHina Totally rocks!I liked how you made it that Naruto didn't have a clue about Valentine's day! |
 Justicez 2008-05-23 . chapter 1Oh my, this was soo good and funny, nice work. The ending was sweet and funny too. |
 FictionWeaver 2008-01-31 . chapter 1I can almost see this happening in cannon or in a good N/H fic. Lots of comedy and well planned, I just wish it was longer.
FictionWeaver |
 DarkHeroOrion 2008-01-18 . chapter 1Two words to describe this fic...chaotic mayhem. It was funny and light-hearted. It was good to see the characters act in-character, so Naruto's thickheadedness really shines through on this one. Kudos! |
 AiSard 2007-11-27 . chapter 1gawdlol hilarious >.< especially the very end what with Hiashi telling Naruto to call him Father and Neji's nod of consent along with Naruto's oblivious-ness to it all, inane belief that everything is now turning out to be all right after all *snicker* =P |
 Marz1 2007-11-20 . chapter 1pretty good short story with everyone in character and everyone beating up poor naruto! good job! |
 lil.ramen.lover 2007-11-13 . chapter 1he proposed on the first date?!?! OMG! LMAO
GOOD JOB! |
 Ivellios 2007-10-25 . chapter 1This was a great one-shot. I like how Naruto is so clueless that he doesn't even realize he proposed to Hinata and that they are engaged. Yet another hilarious one shot. My question is, when will you update "Awakening of the Slumbering Beast." Well I hope you are well and that you can update soon.
Your Friend,
Zach |