That was an awesome and great story loved it!

Nice story.
Little bit strange... yeah, and for me it was sometimes hard to read. (English is not my maternal language...)
But I enjoyed it.

What a creative and involving story. John and Teyla were very in character. Thanks for sharing.

You've created the confusion and tension between John and Teyla beautifully. I like this AU Atlantis as trading post and the mysterious world they are visiting. Why can John respond to her thoughts? Can't wait to find out.

Great story, I love your take on John and Teyla! Can't wait to read more of your work!!

That was marvelous, what effort you must've put into it, thank you.

Greatly enjoyed it.

It is the first story of yours i've ever read, gratefully recommended this way by Camy & vaberella on GW. To think, if i hadn't, how poorer i'd be for it.

I read this story on Wraithbait and liked it so much I decided to give another review. This is a wonderful story that is beautifully written. I impatiently await your next story.

I really enjoyed this. I'm a big fan of you work after reading Visions of the Future and this work is just as good. Thanks for sharing.

Now this is a bloody great read. I love your style, you come out strong and manipulative. I seriously thought they were in the middle of a battle and Ronon was killed (although I did find it interesting there was no mention of Rodney). I really liked how it was just a paint ball training.

Then we move into the advancement of Atlantis with the MWG and PG having alliances and the massive changes in the city was wicked to read about. And this story with the Briscerans and JOhns genes, just amazing. Overwhelming but worth the read.

I'll give a more detailed review for the next chapter, it's almost 1am and I have to be up at 6, but I had to say my peace first.

I'm so glad you're a JT writer and this new fic is amazing. Let me know if you use msn chat, you'd be welcome at one our chat conferences. I'm also known as vaberella.

Oh by the way you definitely made it on my alert list and fave list.