 Irrelevancy 2009-03-02 . chapter 1oh yeah~!
xDD
God I love these two~~
beautifully written~~
n.n |
 Insane Slytherin 2008-03-27 . chapter 1Aw... cute! I love it! |
 catwwomen47 2007-08-03 . chapter 1OMG XD That was so cute and the ending was perfect *grins* a blushing Ed is a cute Ed...bye bye for now CW47 OUT |
 Ele Goddess of Elements 2007-07-08 . chapter 1lol, aw, that line was so sweet |
 JuubiOokami 2007-07-08 . chapter 1AW! well, it wasn;t that super angsty...it was sweet. I liked it alot. patt on the back! he he, I'm going to look up more of your stories now...I like your style! |
 jam280 2007-05-17 . chapter 1 Once in a while, out of good humor, Roy would mutter the word “pull,” and Riza would casually toss a card of some sort out like a Frisbee. He would snap his fingers and smile in amusement at the sound of a card being reduced to ashes.
That above was definitely my favorite part. It made me laugh so hard that my cat who was sleeping peacefully on my lap got up and /ran/ away.
It also caused a multitude of coughing and hacking, trying to regain my breath. xDD
-Claps- I liked this short little... would one call it a one-shot? I believe so... Heh.
~Jam280 |
 ElegantPaws 2007-04-08 . chapter 1Cute, charming and quietly sexy piece! |
 Peachi Bunni 2007-03-31 . chapter 1ahahha, knew he'd get the drift of it eventually!
:) nice work! |
 dfghjgf 2007-03-01 . chapter 1lmao, that was cute. |
 MysteryLady-Tx 2007-02-21 . chapter 1Oh that was so BEYOND SWEET I loved iit, oH man, Go ED, hehehehe
THANKS:D |
 Alchemybabe13 2007-02-20 . chapter 1KAWAII!
Sorry but this was so cute! I absolutely loved it! I'm a bit late in reading it but i was reading your profile and saw it. You write extremely well. This is an awesome fic! |
 Nuitari Aquarius 2007-02-17 . chapter 1Oh well, that's nice...
That's cute too ^^ Edward blushing is such an interesting sight !
Well, hope you'll write something else !
Great work. |
 HisokaYukiko 2007-02-15 . chapter 1I feel exactly the same way Roy felt at the beginning. Except i was resentful to pink, not red.
You have pleased me. Your story is now on my favourites. |
 renata 2007-02-15 . chapter 1 Aw, so sweet! |
 Luna-Lunak 2007-02-15 . chapter 1I read it and... you know, I'm absolutly against coursing in fics if it isn't for underlineing something important... but the first thing that I thought after reading this was:
Jesus Christ! It's so fucking cute! (Sweet! Perfect!) I love it!
It was perfect thing for Valentain's day. I absolutly adore it and hope you will write more fic like this one. |