I just wanted you to know how utterly AWESOME this fic is! I loved reading every bit of it. Thank you so SO much for sharing!

I loved the story. Great character development too.

I hoped they invited Chaka for the wedding. :)

Excellent story! That was loads of fun to read, loved your characterizations of Daniel and Vala, and the rest once they met with them again. Great work!

Wow!

This story is just awesome! I started reading it last night, stayed up way late to get through most of it, and finished it tonight. It's totally awesome.

First, your writing is wonderful. You describe everything very well, everything makes sense, and the whole thing just flows nicely. You must be very talented for being able to write such a long story and make the whole thing flow as nicely as this one!

The storyline is very very interesting! I loved reading every word of it, and it was totally worth losing sleep last night just to get through it. You can bet I'll be going back through it again!!

I absolutely love how you've written Daniel and Vala. They're very in-character. I love the slow transition they both made in their journey together. It's just completely awesome.

The emotions are very real, you've portrayed them perfectly. Very in-depth, and very appropriate!!

And a BABY! I was really hoping that's why she was so emotional at the end! I love babies! And I love reading about people having babies!

Overall, I'm very impressed with this. I absolutely love it!

I'd like to thank you for all the hard work you put into this story, and for your willingness to share it with others!

Well, have completed my 2nd tour of reading this entire fic and still think it is one of the best I have read for this pairing. If only TPTB had the intestinal fortitude and creative drive that you, Cleo had, this past 2 seasons of SG-1 would have been much better. Not just the D/V parts, but the show as a whole would have been improved.
I can only say "Thank you" to you and other fan fic writers (GEN and Ship) that pour so much time, talent, and creative energy into making stories such as this available to readers like myself. My hat's off to all of you!

Well, I just have to say that I have never cared for Kelowna, or Quinn, for that matter. So, blowing up the planet, even though it cost Daniel his life when he tried to prevent it before, is only poetic justice for me, as an SG-1 fan. Daniel would frown and start to lecture me about cultural differences, so let's keep that between us, ok?

Cleo - this is one of the better chapters of a long line (so far) of great, entertaining chapters in this story. I was thinking how much these two have grown together and alike. For example, in one of the chapters Vala gave herself a self-hug (so Daniel like) when she was feeling stressed. And than, Daniel in this chapter knew how many strides Vala needed to go from wall to wall, because he paced the same number, just to stay even with her. Thanks for your time and talents in writing this story.

I really liked this chapter and wanted to say thanks for writing. I remember the episode when Daniel introduced himself as the "Great Oz", which I thought was a sure sign of his hanging out with Jack too much. But, if I remember correctly, Jacob about choked on his own spit when Daniel did it. That was too funny, in itself!

are you going to do sequel for this?? almost done readin

god i love this story this my 3rd time rereading it and each time i read catch on to something i missed before

*sob* It's over! That is easily one of, if not the, best Stargate stories I've ever read! I really enjoyed reading it...but I blame you completely for me staying up until 3AM last night and only getting about 5 hours of sleep! It's just hard to find a good stopping point with this story. Quick question: once I get a printer, would you mind if I printed it out so that I can always have access to it, even if I don't have access to a computer or the internet? If you don't want me to, that's fine. Again, you did an amazing job with this! It was really well written! I plan on reading more of your stories as soon as I can, but not tonight! It's already about 5 minutes past midnight, and I have to work tomorrow. Again, wonderful job! I really enjoyed reading this! I wish you luck on all future writing projects!

"The president of the SG-1 Fan Club can come, too." LOL! Another great line!

Awesome chapter! I was grinning like a fool the whole time! I never would have guessed that the super soldiers were Daniel and Vala! Great twist! I'm off to read more!

Okay, those last two lines are easily the best I've ever read! That is awesome!

Now, my question is: Was the fact that the name Daniel used also a reference to the Lazarus in the bible, the man who was raised from the dead by Jesus Christ? Guess I'll have to read on to find out if anyone made that connection! Still loving this story!