Dude...so worthy of a second installment...seriously. Alright, I know I know...long shot but I had to try... *grins*

Tell me that wasn't the end...lol I wonder what he was thinking when he left when she found him and when she berated him. I may never know but good story none the less...lol

I think this one's my favorite of your trio, maybe just because I actually know the song. I hear that song all the time, but I never really heard the line "I bet my hands I can stay here". I know those words weren't yours, but they were a good choice, that struck true. The song is blended well with the story as well. Good job!
-J