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Arien Icelight
2008-12-23 . chapter 1
Actually, you should make a warning: causes death by suffocation because of inevitable "Aw"s. Seriously, that was so sweet... Just like chocolate. Looks like I have the same taste as Yuffie)
Thank you for this warm and cute and fluffy and... (add more nice words, I am not coheret due to the overdose of sweetest chocolate) one-shot.
Added to favourites. ^^
WithinHerHeart
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
Help me! I'm drowning in the absolutely adorable Yuffentine fluff! So...cute! *dies*
Anyway! Love the story!
-Kiara Libiria Bunansa
Sousukes-Girl
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
Love it!

Sg
Tokyo.Couture
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
Aw so Cute!
I LOVE this Story!
Is was soo Nicely written!
notareadlperson1234
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
aw that is soo darling and cute and it just makes a girl wanna cuddle with her sweetie! great job portraying the sweet feelings of valentines day and love without sex and **
dream.sequins
2007-06-20 . chapter 1
Oi, I tried reviewing this a couple of days ago, but the site was screwing up...

Anyway, I just wanted to say that this was fantastic! Yuffie's characterization was perfect-o, as was Vincent's for the most part. There was just enough fluff to make it great, but not enough to make it unbelieveable.

And dark chocolate pwns milk all the way!
^_^
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
ITS SO WARM AND FUZZY!5/5
SkyblueSunshine
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
Hehe, I love the way you wrote some the parts for Yuffie, they are very in-character! (Especially that "Yuffie Kisaragi, the champion of the earth and sky, the conqueror of evil, the single white rose of Wutai", it brings back old memories!)

On second thought, let me take back what I just said: I didn't love the way you wrote SOME of the parts for Yuffie, I LOVED THE ENTIRE STORY!

But...well, I think VincentwasalittlebitOOC. LOL, for him to have such a cheerful inner dialogue would be like for him to be on...sugar high! xD

Eh...
"Yuffie was a bit depressed. It was after dinner, one that had passed in embarrassed silence on Cloud and Tifa’s part, enraged silence on Shelke’s part, cheerful silence on Yuffie,...'s part"
Yuffie is depressed and cheerfully silent? xD I found that passage odd.
Haahaha, I almost died of happiness when I even saw a yuffie-shelke competition (esp. when YUFFIE won!) in it, it just made the fic so much more dynamic!

What makes the icing on top is how much you developed their relationship (from pre-confession to kiss!)

Well, if you want my opinion, it wasn't overly fluffy or sappy or corny at all (well, maybe a little at the end), since there actually is a plot, or at least the development of a relationship =)

Why does Yuffie call Shelke Shelke seal?
Tainted Remedy
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
Aw! That was fluff galore! I absolutely LOVED it! :) :)
Kenji Hino
2007-03-27 . chapter 1
That was so kawaii!
I loved it!
Vincent and Yuffie are the most adorable pairing ever!
Unseen Watcher
2007-03-25 . chapter 1
Very nice...and sweet, hee. One step at a time for them, but they're walking together.
Random Reviewer 2
2007-02-19 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! And of course you get points for comic relief moments. They're so important. Great job! What a perfect way to celebrate Vincent's day! My nickname is Rissy too...weird...anyway, I'm ttly faving this.
redlei
2007-02-15 . chapter 1
^_^ it's cute ^_^
are you sure they just slept? xD jk jk
chibininjaa
2007-02-15 . chapter 1
YAY FOR THE FLUFF!


Hahah this one was really cute!

Only if you'll be my Kisaragi...hahahahahah that was good!


Heehe...awwh Aerith!


WRITE MORE FLUFF OR I SHALL SEND MY ARMY OF NOOBS TO DEFEAT YOU!
xXChineseChinkiXx
2007-02-15 . chapter 1
That was great, the final two sentenses made me smile
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