I really liked this idea-that a sound can change the way we view things. I think the story and the emotions ring true for the characters, and I love the ending and how it ties the beginning together.

Great job!

I'm no shipper, but...

You tell a compelling story, and it just feels right - Kara's feelings, fears and hopes, all linked to that little sound.

Well done. :)

I enjoyed this, I thought the clink motif worked very well linking the scenes. Two parts that really struck me were the way Kara realises they're acting like just friends and nothing more, and doesn't like it (!), and the part where she misses her long hair because it was like a shield. I really liked that image, and also the following point that Lee knew her with both long and short hair, that he knows all the different sides of her.
And a happy ending, which is always cool :) Nice to see a new story from you.

I love it! Great line used in the summary...

I liked this and the "clink" concept is cool. I could totally see Starbuck picking up on that.

Keep it coming!

I liked it a lot, and I loved the "clink" theme and how it ties all the scenes together, very inventive. Great work. ^Femme

IMHO I thought this was a great idea for a story. You really captured a good amount of emotion in a short setting.