Ah, it reminds me of Maiya and Don Wei in a new fashion. It made me feel sorry for Aikka at the end, and I cannot really think of a way you could have improved it. Excellent job.

God, I just had this...yearning...to cut open my screen and clamber clumsily into this piece of writing. Regarding reading and reviewing, I'm actually back on ffnet now, and it feels surprisingly great. And dammit if I didn't miss your writing like hell.

That was a very interesting story, I'd like to see more.

Oh.. This is so sad. But I love it anyway!

Your words, and how the story flows is wonderful! Also, I loved the simple gesture of Jordan chainging the weather for Eva. It sounds so like him.

This is defenetly one of the better one shots I've read. Well done.

wow, that was cool. i always wanted to see more things from jordan's pov, and this was just what i needed. very awesome!

aw, so cute, so sad. THIS is why they should have a sequel, or at least an epilogue!

Wow, that was simply beautiful! Once more your writing impresses me! It does seem odd to have Eva and Aikka marry, but it adds a lot to the emotional punch. Now I'm wondering what an elderly Aikka would look like. XD