 LocoGreggo 2008-05-08 . chapter 14You left it there? Oh come on...give me an epilogue or
new story...something...please. I'm not opposed to begging.
:-D Awesome job. |
 LocoGreggo 2008-05-08 . chapter 13Great continuation. |
 PisceanPal23 2008-04-07 . chapter 14Wow, that was a different direction. I'm kind of left wanting more of a closure to the case, but in a way it adds effect to the actual closeness of Greg and Sara. The ending about popping the question was adorable! In all, it was an awesome story! |
 Marmel C.c. 2008-03-26 . chapter 14my dear Kegel (:, I've waiting for you to update this fic so well done, lol.
I'm soo intrigued now, :$
ttyl (L)
Maar, |
 necira-skies 2008-03-25 . chapter 14very sweet ending :-) I'm curious about how you were planning on ending this, especially since part of me feels that the case didn't really get wrapped up...at least not yet...is there a sequel in the works? |
 AshlynnElizabeth 2008-03-25 . chapter 14AW! sequel? please?
Please?
(sorry)
Ashley Lynn |
 necira-skies 2008-03-23 . chapter 13Glad to see another update from you (and I'll admit it is good to hear that you have written the end, because I'm so curious to see how this wraps up) |
 PisceanPal23 2008-03-18 . chapter 13I'm glad you've posted some good reading...I haven't been in school in the past week due to winter storms, so I was starting to get a bit bored. Anyways...
Once again, awesome chapter. I have no idea who could be doing this to Greg. If you;ve mentioned them, I can't tell who it is. Awesome suspense. I can't wait for more:D |
 LocoGreggo 2008-03-01 . chapter 12Great job. Please continue. |
 LocoGreggo 2008-02-27 . chapter 11That was an awesome chapter. |
 PisceanPal23 2008-02-16 . chapter 12This is really suspenseful...poor Sara is helpless to protect Greg, and there is still the whole possibility that he's being followed. If that's true, then they won't be too happy that Greg is still alive and well.
Well, all I can say now is awesome writing, awesome job, and I look forward to a time when you can post more. Yay, Can't wait:D |
 Evil Genius of the COCA 2008-01-27 . chapter 11Oh boy. You had me worked up over nothing last chapter... but at least Sara and Greg are okay, although it seems Sara isn't fully outta the woods yet... but at least Nick found the water bottles... but that means someone was watching/stalking Greg... this is gettin' interesting... update soon please?
Love and Peace ~EG~ |
 necira-skies 2008-01-27 . chapter 11glad to see some updates from you, although I know how life can take over and occupy all your time. Good job on this chapter, I especially enjoyed the line from Greg to Sara about how that was no way to keep him company. And, so now we know Greg's been watched...but for how long? and why? |
 PisceanPal23 2008-01-26 . chapter 11:O
This is getting good! Ooh, who would be after Greg? And what connection is there to the other murders? Is Greg a random target?? Ahh, too many questions, can't wait for more! Awesome job thus far! |
 Iaveina 2008-01-25 . chapter 11Ha! I read this story yesterday and was gonna review and beg and update! =D |