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Bobette13
2009-11-07 . chapter 34
oh my god.
this is the closest i've come to crying from a story in forever!..and then laughing from the inverview, talk about a change of pace! that was really cute, by the way :)

i didnt think this would be that good, especially when you said it was based on cinderella- seriously, i thought, you're gonna do the same old harry meets draco plot and make it more predictable by making him cinderella? please! but, it was quite original and a lovely read. kudos to you.

9/10, for keeping my reading, smiling, and guessing throughout the whole thing.

honest i did try to stop reading and focus on physics, but the world of this story so beats the world of a dead physics-y guy. even if in my geekiness i enjoy physics.
wintermozartlily
2009-10-28 . chapter 34
Hi. I first come acroos with your lovely story in the adultfanfiction and just cannot wait for the update so quickly jump to here to read the whole story, and I am sorry that I wasn't on the supporting train while you are writing this story. It is a sort of belated support though. I really love this story and how it made me cry. There is nothing like this describ love in such intense way. How to love a person, how much would you do to get that greatest love...a leap of faith. You have me crying and sobbing reading the last couple charpters. I cannot say I like the endding but it is ncessary and it has to be done. Only feel happy when God really leave his angle in the arms of happiness. Wonderfully done. Really thank you for such great read, sincerely, thank you. You told me a great lesson..love, sometimes turely can heal everything, throught blood,tear and pain,even lost, but,as long as you hold true to yourself, and believe yourself. love can save everything.
Thank you.
TalaDentro
2009-10-12 . chapter 33
*sniffles* That was so sad... I like that he got to be with both Draco and Blaise, but sad that they didn't get to stay together for very long. Epic story. Wonderfully put together.
Mysterium Iniquitatis
2009-08-27 . chapter 34
I absolutely love this story. There was so much emotions and the characters were positivily wonderful! During the middle of the story, I felt like as if Harry can't love anyone and the main characters where always misunderstanding each other. But at the end of the story, it was very tender.

Your story tells me to love strongly forever even when nothing good come out of it, it's still never faltering, pure love which is the most important, number one priority. So don't ever forget or regret it!
Zoomi
2009-05-26 . chapter 33
This was a beautiful story that left me in tears. I just wish Draco had much longer to live, three years just isn't long enough. Now I must go find a fic with a happy-ending because my tears won't stop. Please keep writing, I'd love to read more of what you can cook up.
ArwendeImladris
2009-04-02 . chapter 33
Great story. I liked the resolution of the Draco/Harry/Blaise triangle. You just made both Draco and Blaise so lovable - I know I would not be able to choose!
Sirin Black
2009-02-13 . chapter 34
awesome story, i was totally bawling at the end
Death Eater
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
Wow, even from the first chapter I can tell that you are a spectacular writer and that this story is going to be fabulous! Your description and characterization...wow!

Erm, this might be a bit awkward, but I'm a staff member at this relatively new site called the Dark Mark, which caters to Harry Potter fanfiction and original fiction. And we could really, really use a talented author like yourself.

If you're interested, you can go to w[dot]the-dark-mark[dot]com

Can't wait to read the rest of the story! :)
aylan
2008-12-09 . chapter 34
I finished this story over an hour ago. At the end I felt as though my best friend had just died. I have been crying in my room ever since I finished. My sister thinks I'm a great big idiot to get so worked up over "imaginary people." It was a truly beautiful story and I was deeply touched. I am glad that Draco and Blaise came to a truce in the end. I am also glad that Arthan took the throne!
blue-feather
2008-11-23 . chapter 33
well...What can i say? This novel left me with a funny feeling.It is UNIQUE and contrary to what you mentioned in the begining of this chapter about people believing this to be a "threesome", i never thought about it like that.
You know,when i read it,i wanted harry and draco to together always so badly that sometimes i felt guilty that i found the love between harry and bless equally real and it was very hard to read.
That said, there are so many things in this story that leave me wih a strong need to scratch the odd itch at my heart. This ending was very good. BUT, there is that strange feeling...Like, well...Discomfort. You really gave justice to Blaise and Draco, But Draco...This make me cry-again- you know? Because on the other hand,It is so UNFAIR...
But when i think about it, if Blaise was the one who died(or he disapeared or something),Draco is mortal and he'd eventually die, leaving Harry in an eternity of loneliness and longuing. So it's not that bad after all...Draco was gone with the knowledge that Harry and Arthan were truly loved and would soon be joined with little Moira whom he loved too,before her birth. He knows his family won't suffer.

BUT BUT BUT!! I can't accept it lol! really, -damn,my eyes are leaking- and i have no tissue.I'm too lazy to go find one.
I am frustrated...
Arthan claiming the throne was one of the beautifulest scene in this ending.He'd make his father so proud.

Harry is the center,the heart of this story.But each character was unique and I was attached to them-especially Draco.He's my favorite and-damn, i'm crying still-he's the best! and somehow, i hate you for making me cry,or i love you ...I don't know. Draco's death was like a pull to reality.Welcome to the real world Andy, human die.Faeries live happily ever after.
DRACO died so young.Harrywas pregnant at 16...how many years of difference is there between harry and draco btw? Whatever, he died so young and...seriously, i can't accept this lol,i can't stop crying here it's pathetic really, but i don't know...What is the most unerving is that i have NO ONE to blame ç_ç.There is no one i can bash even blaise's mother.

I can't stop reading and re-reading the last scene,wih the cutest family ever, and you know what, it make me cry and right know i hardly see my keyboard and i can't stop sniffing.

It's so CRUEL.I...Just it.It's a "happy ending" but I think it's the SADDEST ENDING I ever ever read.I'm agonizing here ...Wow, I ca' stop .It hurt to much, and the fact that his death was not writen make it worse for me(i'm glad it's not though) I'm re-reading the last scene and each word again, the knowledge that it is one one their LAST sweet moments together is killing me.

Even if Blaise 's love is very strong. The bond between Draco ad harry is the strongest.He knew harry since he was a baby, and their love was the strongest. Damn, Why can't i stop this pointless review?I'm ranting and i know it can be annoying but ...I have this feeling of discomfort that won't go and i can't stop thinking about this and i feel anger too.I'm being insane?It's silly heh?I'm crying over a fanfiction ,and if my brother was here,right know he 'd not stop mocking me.
I didn't remember if you put a character death warning for this fic.Even if it is not writen,Draco die in this fic.I rarely read death-fics becauseit's to painful to read.Exept when it is so well-writen and well thought like yours. But this fic is with no doubt the most painfuly beautiful fic ever...
Well; I'm off now.I stopped crYing but now my nose is running.
thank you for this and maybe i will read your other stories.I sure will, i mean,the same brain who managed to realise a masterpiece like yours is surely the same that will produce another amazing story^^
Thank you!
Andy
ps:arthan hearing something odd from his parents bed made me smile^^
blue-feather
2008-11-22 . chapter 18
Oh my god! I am crying...This was too much.There are not many story that could make my eyes water and cry.
Hi!
I don't know, if you remember me Sheila! I stopped reviewing at chapter 16 it seems,meaning, i stopped reading there.I thought a lot about you fic you know...it is UNIQUE and POETIC.This chapter is heart-wrenching. I re-read chapter 16 of course,but very quickly because all the details suddeny came back to life in my mind and for this fic, everything in my imagination for the landscape for instance is beautiful.Harry and Draco are beautiful and so are Blaise and evrybody else. It's only in your fic that my mind manage to imagine such beautiful characters. I love nature,and i can't help but have in mind the beautifulest places ever for your story.Your words are magical and they reached my heart making me believe that this is real.Their feelings are so real that i smiled when they did, i suffered when they did, and i cried for Blaise and Harry. Their bond is so complicated, and special. Wow! I'm crying again...I can't believe this managed to make me cry, i mean YOU made me cry.And I congratulate you for that, because it only happened to me a few times and it was because i was reading books written by geniuses.So...Are you a genius too then?I think you are because you created a whole world, an unique universe where I found myself lost in.
Do you remember,Sheila, back then...I couldn't really write too much because my english was bad.I still need improvement, and i'm trying everyday.But I'm glad I know enough to let you know what i feel about your work. I stopped reading your fic(well, fanfiction in general actually) because real life was tough, and it took away from me some precious and caring souls and left me without a big sister to watch over me.
I want to thank you with all my heart for writing this masterpiece "Son of Avalon" and I apologise if I won't review the next chapters like I used to do with the previous ones. I'll review the last one though, and i know i won't read it all tonight...Thank you.Oh! And I hope you're healthy and everything goes right for you in Malaysia^^
Much love,
Andy.
ps: apologies for grammatical errors and typos in this review^^
snowdoors9
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
I have already read this story and i'm so sorry i didn't review before. First of all, AMAZING! Not only very creative, but also very well written. I'm only sad that i've already read it because i can't make myself read something twice. It is one of my favorite fics ever. I congratulate you on the masterpiece.
KingofLoosePages
2008-09-29 . chapter 34
YAY! I loved thise story so much that I'm going ot check out your other stuff! =D

Taku
SiriusBlackIsGod
2008-09-11 . chapter 34
OMG that was an absolutely beautiful story. I loved it so much and I actually cried in places. Would have preferred if Draco hadn't died at the end but it just strengthened the fic all the more. Brilliant.
adictd2life
2008-08-04 . chapter 34
that was one of the most amazing stories I've read. Incredible. So touching, it is now deeply engraved in my mind. Wonderful, simply and complicatedly wonderful.
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