In my opinion this poem reflects pretty well the desperation and confusion on the Woglinde when the Gnosis took over the ship.
Somehow it reminds me on the poem in "The Lord of the rings" when they are under the earth and they read the diary of this dead king, it goes like "the drums (blah,blah) can't escape" and so on.
Well, anyway to come to the point ... one can say that yoù've done a great work here! ^.^