I will not flame you. In fact i will introduce a cherecter that you can use or not. You are doing a great job.

Name: High Supreme Commander Jase

Occupation: Head of Worlds' Military Group

Sex: Male

Hight: 6'4"

Weight: 250 Pounds

Hair: Black Shoulder Length

Skin: Death White

Type of Being: Dragon Human (more human then dragon)

Wings: Green

Eyes: Light purple unless he is using his brand of magic, at that time his eyes are dark purple. this change also happens when he gets angry.

wearing: Skin tight one piece jump suit with two holes for his wings. Over this is a black vest with the Worlds' Military symbol on it. This symbol is a like the spell casters' ring in Yu-Gi-Oh in white with a flame in the center of it evenly split into green, red, blue, and silver. He is also wearing black dress pants.

History and Background: Unknown except for that he has close ties to Kari (Hikari) Kamiya from digimon and Ash from Pokemon.

Personality: Friendly to a point. He will not tolerate injustice and is very gentle when treating the wounds of his friends or enemies wounds.

Personal Enemy: The Dark Dragon King from Jase's home world and planet of Dragon Land.


If you need more data on this person please send me a personal message or a reply to this review with the questions you want ans2wered and i will answer them ASAP.

First, a little aside to FR:

Please go flame Miss Camilla Sandman first -- she's the originator of the X School of Fanfiction Writers idea. Perhaps some of the speech modifiers are a little over-the-top, but even my inner wanker doesn't see a damn thing wrong with this.



At any rate, it's a nice idea, but have you contacted Miss Cam? She might want you to get permission/notify her about this. (Not that she'd stop you -- I understand she just likes to keep a list of who's done a School story for which fandom.)