so cute

Oh...my...God. Myriah, this was...wow. I can't even describe it. How the HELL did you do that? You blended the fic so nicely with the episode that it all seemed so real. I'm wondering how I never read this before but it...it is definitely favorite material. I could go on and on about how great this is...

Its good.

Excellent fic. You've done an amazing job on characterisation - using detailed bits which are often missed to project a character's feelings. I like the small nuances you showed with Hunter - his grunt, his cold hostility etc which I can recall clearly from that episode. It's extremely difficult to bend canon to suit a fic, but better than that you did a good job of blending in your fic with canon!

The writing's good too, and I really like the overall flow of the fic. Great job!!

You know, I usualy don't care for this pairing. It was you're constant reviews that made me determined to check out your stuff as soon as I got a free moment, and now I'm really glad I did. This was really nice. Very heartfelt, and very true to Hunter. It definitly showed his dark and brooding side, and I love the way he handled the situation. A very nice piece. I might even check out some more of this pairing... that is if you write it! :)

ok i like it its good work

Aww..that was really sweet! i can't wait to read more!!

Very cool! I've always been wondering about Hunter's reaction as well. Putitng it like this was truly great! please do another chapter!

Aww! You just wanted to hug Dustin during that ep. Amazing fic!

Poor Hunter and Dustin. I sware I wanted to rip Marah's heart out when she hurt Dustin. But I am sure I am not the only one.lol :p I hope you have a second part to this beacuse you can NOT leave it like that.

Aww, I wish there was aonther chapter to this. It was really good. I liked it!

Excellent story. It was a shame what happened to Dustin in that episode. I hope you could write a story about what happens to Hunter, Dustin and Marah during the final episode. You like what was Hunter thinking about when they freed Marah and Kapri and when he finds out they both enrolled in the Ninja Academy. It would be interesting to found out. Please write soon.

I loved it this story you should keep on adding to it i love it