Neat concept. I like it.

another awesome fic

I think it's really cool how you revealed the truth about Chumley, and why he wanted to be a professional duelist.

This story was very enjoyable. It has Hayato, who needs to have more written about him. The story has Kabayama, who is largly overlooked and the story has mentions of Pegasus, one of my favorite characters from the origional YGO. This story made my day. Thank you for writing such a good story.

Very good! There should be much more Hayato fic!

Nice story! ) There aren't many stories about Hayato out there.

I was halfway done reading this when I suddenly remembered who his father was. I had completely forgotten before. Silly me.

Anyway, I don't really think there's anything to criticize here, so...