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ugty
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
Fi moved in with her aunt Melinda in Seattle, You know she and her twin daughters were in strangeling.
thebestestfriendsforever
2009-11-06 . chapter 4
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
beauty0102
2009-09-14 . chapter 6
this is bauty7890102 I moved to this account because I check almost every day.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
beauty0102
2009-09-14 . chapter 5
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
beauty0102
2009-09-14 . chapter 4
yeah great chapter.
beauty0102
2009-09-14 . chapter 3
yeah great chapter.
beauty0102
2009-09-14 . chapter 2
yeah great chapter.
beauty0102
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
yeah great chapter.
rockrose
2009-03-29 . chapter 6
I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this and am looking forward to reading Irene's reaction.
beauty7890102
2009-02-01 . chapter 6
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
LittleMissMuppet
2008-11-27 . chapter 5
Hey, you updated on my birthday. :) That's pretty neat.


Well awesome story so far! I hope Fi joins their band, though whats going to happen when they go back on tour? And is Fiona ever going to get her 'ability' back?


I'll be waiting for an update!
LittleMissMuppet
2008-11-27 . chapter 4
Wow, was I just picking up on some flirting going on between Carey and Fi? ;) Hilarious dialogue by the way, I can picture Carey so easily when reading this it's scary!

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“Hey I was looking for someone else’s mail and yours just happened to open, and there it said, Congratulations Fi, and I thought, what has Fi got to be congratulated about? Should I know? Should I congratulate her? So I kept reading.” He had started it as a defense and ended with a matter of fact smile on his lips.

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Loved that part! :D
LittleMissMuppet
2008-11-27 . chapter 3
Oh, so Clu notices the ring too? :D Great chapter, I liked how you added that while Fiona was with her aunt she did musicals. I could see that happening actually! LOL. :D


Continuing...
LittleMissMuppet
2008-11-27 . chapter 2
Bahahaha! They were eavesdropping on the conversation, how sneaky. :P So didn't the school accept Jack, or did he just decide to turn it down?

Okay, next chapter!
LittleMissMuppet
2008-11-27 . chapter 1
I just finished reading the first chapter and I've got to say, I am really enjoying it! I loved Clu and Fiona's part at the end, too cute for words - but I always thought there was something between them in the show. ;)

I also loved Fi's reaction to the ring, when the engraving vanished; it seemed very in character and something I could imagine happening if the show had taken a different turn like your story has.

Anyway, great job! I'm going to continue on to the next chapter! :)
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