 shiney32 2009-09-26 . chapter 1I just started reading this and I'm already in love with it! none of the characters are OOC, I can totally imagine Iroh getting excited over zuko haha :D can't wait to read the rest! |
 Miss Katara x 2009-08-21 . chapter 15Wow, now that was one of the best Avatar modern day fanfics I have ever read. The language was amazing, and all the idea's you had up your sleeve were great! None of the characters were OOC, everyone was perfect. I'm going to read your oneshots right away!
I wish I was as talented as you!
Miss Katara x |
 Midnight Wolfy 2009-03-26 . chapter 14Wow Wow!! I really liked "College Daze". I might even say it is my favorite AU!Zutara |
 Pointy Objects 2009-03-23 . chapter 15This is amazing! As someone who is relatively new to this fandom (I was actually pointed in your direction by a few seasoned Zutara vets, who highly recommended your story), this was brilliant. I certainly don't know a ton about the fandom, or things from earlier episodes, but this was totally clear. I loved how each character reflected who they were in the carton somehow; that was a nice surprise.
Iroh, I have to say, was the most in character. Not that the others weren't, but I could hear his voice in everything that he said, which is remarkable, especially as he is a favorite character of mine. Moving on, Zuko and Katara! Before I go into a girlish rant about how adorable they were for the entirety of this story, I have to commend you on how amazingly you wrote their growth. Katara started out as a strong, somewhat dependant girl, who had a few weanesses in regards to guys. And Zuko ws plain, old socially inept. And byt eh end of the fic their transformations are genuinely noticable. Fantastic. Now, onto the squealing...that was SO cute! OH, I cannot count how many times I just turned away from my computer screen to giggle at their antics. The beach chapter played out so smoothly; it was flawless. And every transistion you made was the same; no jumping around trying to make me figure out who was talking or in what context. Crystal clear, through and through.
I have a lot more to say, but in all honesty, I just kind of want to read this all over again. So, I think I will. And I'll try to hit up that sequal before bed. Phenominal job!!
-Pointy_Objects |
 Darkness's Daughter 2009-02-01 . chapter 1This seams like a funny fanfic!! LOL
-zukoluver45 |
 freak-4-God 2008-11-07 . chapter 4hm, what did you do in a past life? lemme see, you were a waterbender, you traveled with the avatar, you enentually got with aang, though zuko is way better for you, you saw a play that had alot of your travels in it so similar, yet so different, and yeah... OH! and you helped defeat Azula!...YEAH THATS ABOUT ITZ! |
 HeartBreaker640 2008-10-09 . chapter 13 Nice Story |
 GHSNEKO 2008-07-28 . chapter 14loved the enitre thing ! |
 Kiwi Curry 2008-07-24 . chapter 14Hey, sweet. I'm your 200th reviewer. 8D
I absolutely LOVED this story. Why can't there be more AU fics out there? I'm addicted to them, I confess. XD Keep up the good work! |
 lalala 2008-07-24 . chapter 5 i luv ur fanfic
p.s I jst got it tht when he was the bluespirit how its his cover
ha (sorry im easily amused) |
 danielle134 2008-05-28 . chapter 15Ya know this would make an awesome movie. |
 danielle134 2008-05-25 . chapter 3I really like this. It's very interesting. |
 Shadowhawke 2008-02-23 . chapter 14Wow, thanks for a very romantic story... you converted the Avatarverse quite well to modern day, and I loved the little Avatar tweaks you made all over! Great AU... good luck with everything including your writing. |
 SiennaEyes 2007-11-21 . chapter 14 I enjoyed every word of it! Thank goodness for great writers like you... I love your descriptions, your scenery set-ups, how you flow your storyline and the random tidbits of actions you added in there. They make the story real. It was really enjoyable to read a great story as such!! Thanks for writing this! :) |
 iluvSokka46 2007-11-04 . chapter 10yes they kissed!
great chapter! |