Great work! I loved the ending and, well everything but, Sirius was funny and Remus played actually matchmaker, poor Sirius he tried, and I love James and Lilly fic. Your is differently on the top though.

Sirius is so funny and so stupid

Very good, why didn't they do that in the first place? Aw, poor Peter

Aw, poor Sirius, head wounds bleed the most

Hmm, i can see the dove bit going wrong. And they're good at transfiguration, just use something else and transfigure it into a dove...

A perfect ending. Could have used just a bit more Peter though.

Awesome story! I especially loved the last chapter- so funny! keep writing, you did a great job! =)

out of curiosity
why dont they use the room or requirement to get the doves
you know pace three times thinking whatever many cages of doves and bam?
just wondering
i guess that would be too easy...
Gina

That was great. I loved it. Really funny.

very funy, i loved it

lol Love how Lily concealed her face so she wouldn't see Sirius without trousers on!

Yay for you! The conversation is so natural between them.

Sirius falling out of the tree was hilarious!

excellent!

Hey!
Awesome story! I really liked it! I think the ending might have been a bit better, but other than that . . . COOL!
;)
~Kt