Absolutely amazing! I loved the ending: big, emotional endings are just so predictable! Good job!

this was a great story and i really enjoyed reading...there's just one thing that bothered me...i don't know if this is different in every country, but were i com e from a jack is worth 11, not 10.so james really got 21.
other than that , great story!
have a great day!
frida

was it chicken soup? i want to know now it shall haunt me in my dreams until i find out wat soup it was!

I was smiling through this whole story, especially the end!

I loved that! I like how it ended, it suits them.
And the bit about Sirius and James being diverse was pretty funny!

cute and funny

lol no, the ending was just perfect... very simple and matter of fact! lovely work xx

it wasn't romantic, but funny. the ending

OH MY GOD, I LOVED IT!

Aww. That was adorable.

Aww. Best proposal ever. Haha. Yes, I'll marry you, but only if you get me soup. Fantastic. I should use that should anyone ever propose to me. Hahaha. They're all great, but I LOVE that.

I liked this story, it was funny and cute at the same time. A wonderful story.

aww haha that was funny

Well, I like it a lot!

I liked the end. It was anti-climactic and it made me laugh.